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velangini

@velangini

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#91

wow awesome os

continue soon

eager to know how arnav gets khushi back in rm

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smithasrk

@smithasrk

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Mind Blowing..Please continue😛

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#93

Really loved this one... Arnav was a sweetheart , the way he's asking her to not leave juts melted my heart...

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anodaksgfan

@anodaksgfan

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#94

Great job as usual sweets...

I love d title..

Continue sooonnn... :)

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Meko

@Meko

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#95

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE pweeez :)

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peepli

@peepli

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#96

great work.. all emotions so wonderfully described..any plans to cont??

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kritash

@kritash

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#97

fantastic and fabulous.
you explained their inner turmoil nicely.
they are one but parted for some time.
really liked these lines:

Looking up into the stars he said..."All tonight, I'll be saying... tomorrow..."

Looking up at the same stars, Khushi said..."All tomorrow, I'll be saying..tonight..."

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nishi

@nishi_I-fian

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#98

Omg,,...its amazin' yar...
Luv tht emotional talk...😭

Awesome...❤️

Wat will gonna happen tomorrow...????🤔
Eager to knw...plz upd. Soon

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archa2810

@archa2810

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#99

m sure they will b together soon... plzz continue this...

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Arshi86

@Arshi86

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#100

That was awesome, now if only the Weeping Drama Queen Anjali had been there to hear that. I can't wait to see how our might ASR gets his wife back.

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