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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: cuteritz
extremely cute & romantic 😳
i loved it
thanks for the pm
update soon

Thanks Cuteritz 🤗

Originally posted by: Maria.
very cute part Payal..well written!!! loved it:)

Thank you Maria...am glad U enjoyed reading it 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Auroni.92
Wow just loved this part...
Honestly can anyone be much cuter than this two...NEVER EVER...they r so unpredictable...first mayank ws admiring his wife, and half-hugged her at the end...on the other side nupur ws playing with his hands and when he caught her red-handed she turned into a blushing queen...
And aww the last part ws so cute...Loved it..
Beautifully written...
Cont soon...

PS: Thanks for praising my vm too...i love getting appreciation for my MN vms as they r SPECIAL to me..:)

Thanks Auroni 🤗

Honestly, there can be no one cuter than our MN😆

m so glad U liked reading the update 😃

About that VM...yeah well U deserve a big round of applause for that one...do make more on MN😳

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Payal-15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: --Sanchu--
THIS PART WAS SUPERB and not to forget damn cute too :)
please continue soon...we would be waiting for more such cute parts :)

Thanks Sanchu...😃

Originally posted by: shafyyy
that was so sweet and cute update...
Very nicely you described Nupur's feelings
when she was close to Mayank and also nicely described Mayank's feelings...
Loved it..
That Crossward part was also very nice..
and speacially part.. which instant They kissed each other,...

nice . very very nice part

Thanks a lot Shaffy 🤗

You always generously comment on the updates😃...makes me feel like a writer sometimes😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed
OMG this was the most beautiful and amazing part of this ff...
i just adore they way they are...

loved it to core...
they way the talk argue and love... and he is dam causal ways.. that make him wht he is...
lovely

Thanks for such an overwhelming response Fiza 🤗

I just hoped that you'll would like it😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Irum.
OMG !!!!Their first kiss.
Beautifully written.
Thnx for pm.

Yup their first kiss😆

Thanks😃

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-
Such an cute n sweet update payal! i'm stil having smile on my face!😃😍
ur ff is so full of small sweet moments of MN.. which is so reminds me of our MN!😳
do update soon!😛

M happy that I could bring that smile on ur face Supriya😃

They remind U of MN? Wow that's a big compliment😳 I always remember MN while writing on them :))

Thanks 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: mayuloveu
wow so much cute . very very romantic. I love it.

Thanks dear😃

Originally posted by: cutiepie12
OMG their fisrt kiss...awww sooo cute 😍
totally in mayur dreamland ❤️

beautiful update
loved every detail of it

tc

Thanks Cutiepie...m glad U could look into the details and like them too 🤗

Originally posted by: Faria.
Very very cute part Payal.wonerful. loved it so much.

Thanks Faria 🤗

Its so good to see you commenting here after long😃 Howz U..?..n where r U gumsum aajkal😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: gopi06
cute & sweet updt payal
cont soon
thanks for the pm

Thank you Gopi😃

Originally posted by: clustersofstar
such a cute update

thanks for replay on comments its feels good that you read comments

Thanks🤗

Ofcos I read the comments n always look forward to read them all😃

Originally posted by: --WHATEVER--
beautiful update Payal.. :)

Thanks Anjali😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur
cute

Thanks Kheya😃

Originally posted by: kiran_arti
VERY CUTE UPDATE
CONTI SOON
THANX FOR THE PM

Thanks Kiran...🤗

Yes! will update soon😆

Originally posted by: shafyyy
That was very very nice part.
Now there marriage have taken a new turn..

Thanks again Shaffy😃

Their marriage...yes...it did take a turn then but m not sure if that is what is looked for by all😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Bhawna_arti
Awesome update.

Thanks Bhawna😃

Originally posted by: shafyyy
loved the song...

Haina...even I like that song a lot!😆

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur
nice
sweet
cute
romantic
awesome
magical
so beautiful ... amazing writting.
continue soon
thanks for thep m.

Thanks thanks...m so happy U could like it in so many ways 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: Mini4
hey PAYAL!!!🤗
A very cute update!!!loved d way u write d cute moments between mayank n nupur so beautifully..great imagination n wonderful story telling skilll!😍
loved d way mayank was initially trying to hide his actual feelings for nupur when he saw her in saree...n den d fighting n sharing during crossword solving was really beautifully written!!n d end their kiss was xtra special one!!😳
lovely choise of song from d movie just married!👍🏼
thanx fr d reply u gav fr my previous comment.😃..
thanx fr d pm...🤗
continue soon!

Thanks Mini 🤗

my imagination is just a fragment of what real MN were...love them ❤️

All these parts I was dying to write actually, kabse soch ke rakha tha and so m extra happy since U'll liked it😆

That song naa...I always loved it...n MN pe toh saare gaame aur bhi beautiful lagte hai naa😃