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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

arnav the harden criminal out for revenge snake is her wonder if the doctor is akash payal sold him out hope she take her family and disappear loved the update thanks for the pm

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damonzlady

@damonzlady

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

wow!m intrigued!this FF's rly interesting!

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aeyshaalim

@aeyshaalim

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Hmm interesting I must say its a unique way to tell a story
But it was really enjoyble
Awesome writing skill u hv
Love it

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CrazY-4-BaRuN

@CrazY-4-BaRuN

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Thanx for the PM ! 😊

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damonzlady

@damonzlady

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

awesome FF!i already luv it!do continue soon!tQ fo d PM!

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catalyst

@catalyst

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

thatz a terrific update!

arnav character is brilliantly etched...love his attitude and his shady,mean character extremely intriguing...hooked on to this!

so the doc's is none other than akash itself...m i correct??

m getting impatient...plz update soon!

luking forward to how u gel the main characters-khusi and arnav together!

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

This was simply bone chilling.

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@sherlockthor

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

wow!intense stuff !! arnav is truly ruthless in this! wonder what he did to khushi!
a very gripping story! can't wait to read further! thnx for pm!

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Homairah

@daydreamerr

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Jeeez, Payal and Arnav. Who'd have thought it.
I like the way you use the characters and fit them into different roles.
Can't wait to read more about Arnavs life, I like how sarcastic and blunt he is. The whole gang thing seems really interesting.
Thanks a lot.

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#70

This is what I did after reading the updates:

Opened another tab, googled dictionary.com and looked for synonyms for the word awesome. I am copy pasting the received results.

alarming, astonishing, awe-inspiring, awful, beautiful, breath taking, daunting, dreadful, exalted, fearful, fearsome, formidable, frantic, frightening, grand, hairy*, horrible, horrifying, imposing, impressive, intimidating, magnificent, majestic, mean, mind-blowing, moving, nervous, overwhelming, real gone, shocking, something else, striking, stunning, stupefying, terrible, terrifying, wonderful, wondrous, zero cool

This is what your update is, all this and much more, with my limited ability I simply state, I really like your work. I am unsure to comment, more often than nought, I feel what I have to say is inadequate.

Do write, as we here are always eager to read good work.

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