Dil Se Dil Thak on RajeevAamna..Chk pg 150 Imp.. - Page 107

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Posted: 17 years ago
suri DEE firstly loads of thanx to u for writing so long and superb part for us😳.👏................it was seriously a beautiful, lovely, romantic.......n cute part😳....marvellous , brilliant , outstanding job dee⭐️......................each n every scene , each n every aspect of story was truely lovelable n complete in itself...........👏...........raj's khushi's fite's love each n every thimg was beautifully defined...............frm very starting ...............d way raj was getting worried abt khushi's medicines was showing raj's care, love n his responsibility towards his wife n baby in a very natural way....potraied very well👏..............aur then khushi ka trip.hona awwwwwww😳................aur unki medicines ke liye fite was so cute 😳.............i can imagine that scene wen khushi was pulling raj cheeks...........how cute n adorable he was looking at that time☺️.............n wow kya reaction tha raj ka wen khushi said ki he sounds like a larki🤣🤣.............bt khushi's xplantaion to prove her point was just fantastic(so in directly xplained by u👏)..................and then that kacha -pakka...my good raj's is too much ...........😆......KBC ka host agli bar raj ko banegaye.............bt punishment sirf khushi ke liye hogi😉..........................aur dee kya punishment the..................awwwwwwwwwwww me was ☺️..bt seriously damn beautiful n romantic scene ..........kushi"s relucancy , raj's nauhtiness ........just perfcet⭐️......1.best scene of that part👏................................n really that vart scenes were very nice..........specially wen raj was talking to himself that he should also keep fast for khushi, n then taking promise frm her that if she would feel hungry then she can take food😳................................lekin phir vasu ke bateein😡😡😡...par how raj behaved wid vasu............too good👏.................and beta -beti wali fite's .........aww kya fite thi......so cute.....😳..................n sabse acha goa trip for all couples wow angad - kripa is goona be parents soon👏.finally veer proposed mukti ....his way of proposal was too romantic...n lovely😳.....now wat to say abt our raj- khushi.......just wow.......❤️......finally ab sab theek hogya...........n d last was d most beautiful scene of this whole part😳..emotions, love, need each n every elemest was present there...........
amazing dee...ur a damn good writer👏................thanks dee for spending 17 precious hours of urs on this part...............really it was amazing n awesome ..........rocking part........⭐️
bt dee nxt part last part..............oh i m gonna miss this lovely story alot.........n five year leap.............i hope bahut khuch naya hoga leap ke baaad😳.specially lots of kids😆😆..............aur plz pihush ko wapas mat lana😡......................deee this is my heartly request plz if possible THEN start a new story ............😳 wid RA😳😳😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
heyyy nice part!!!

enjoyed the concert n all the cute moments !
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

heyyy nice part!!!enjoyed the concert n all the cute moments !



no thankuu vandu dear..🤗

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: rajeevskitu

hey surya!! nice part👏........ good to see raj and kushi happy after a long time😊....... so next is 5yr leap?? God! i think now piyush will come again ....... uffff!! anyways, will wait and watch to kno wot happens😊..... bye take care.........



thanku so much for your comments.... i'll surely try & continue soon..😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pateln_21

Absolutely AMAZING...and thanks for posting the next part soooo quickly!!!! I love your story!!!



thanks a ton..i'am glad that you like my story..😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

mind blowing paart..i liked the way raj was worried when he never so khusi in the room it showed how much he loved her and couldnt live without her.The way raj was teasing khushi was to good the KBC part was amazing.and the way raj and khusi were arguing about if the will have a son or daughter was really cute.cant wait to no what they have.i really liked the way u potrayed how much raj can do 4 khushi and the way he also kept a fast 4 her was really sweet.the scene were raj answers back to vasu was too good.the way angad proved that there are lots of girls who love him swas really intresting cant wait 4 angad and kripa to have their baby.

the way veer proposed to mukti it was amazingly written and im glad mukti said yes.the last scene between raj and khushi was very romantic and finally they are two bodies one soul.👏



thanku so much for such a wonderful comment...i'am really happy after reading your comment..... your comments made my day....thanks once again....i'll try and continue soon..😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
diiiiiii wowwwwwwwwwww awesummm...soo beautifully written..⭐️
n plzzz 5 yr leap ke b/w don't separate raj n khushsi bahut der baad dey met...😊😊
w8ing for nxt one...😃😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
can u plzz post an index of all the updates plzz,
i cant find all ur updates,
i liked the intro n part 1
thanks
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Posted: 17 years ago
wowowowo awesome part dear thx for pm.
I am happy for raj and khushi soo sweet raj ne usske liye fast rakhaaa.
Aww kripa is pregee woww angad ka raection soo funny , now its leap means tension .thx dear for this great long part pl update soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: rajeev-bigfan

diiiiiii wowwwwwwwwwww awesummm...soo beautifully written..⭐️

n plzzz 5 yr leap ke b/w don't separate raj n khushsi bahut der baad dey met...😊😊w8ing for nxt one...😃😛



nehu dear no thankoo yaar..🤗 mujhe khushi hai kii you liked the part...😊 i'll try & continue soon.. 😊

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