Dil Se Dil Thak on RajeevAamna..Chk pg 150 Imp.. - Page 108

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: rajeev_crazy

can u plzz post an index of all the updates plzz,i cant find all ur updates,i liked the intro n part 1...thanks



hey thanku so much..i have added the page numbers on the front page do check it out..😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth

wowowowo awesome part dear thx for pm.I am happy for raj and khushi soo sweet raj ne usske liye fast rakhaaa.Aww kripa is pregee woww angad ka raection soo funny , now its leap means tension .thx dear for this great long part pl update soon.



monika thanku so much...i'am really happy that you liked the part..... even i'am khush kii raj & khushi are together..😊 i'll surely try & continue as soon as possible..😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
pihu dear i have added the page numbers on the front page..check
it out...😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: angel 16

suri DEE firstly loads of thanx to u for writing so long and superb part for us😳.👏................it was seriously a beautiful, lovely, romantic.......n cute part😳....marvellous , brilliant , outstanding job dee⭐️......................each n every scene , each n every aspect of story was truely lovelable n complete in itself...........👏...........raj's khushi's fite's love each n every thimg was beautifully defined...............frm very starting ...............d way raj was getting worried abt khushi's medicines was showing raj's care, love n his responsibility towards his wife n baby in a very natural way....potraied very well👏..............aur then khushi ka trip.hona awwwwwww😳................aur unki medicines ke liye fite was so cute 😳.............i can imagine that scene wen khushi was pulling raj cheeks...........how cute n adorable he was looking at that time☺️.............n wow kya reaction tha raj ka wen khushi said ki he sounds like a larki🤣🤣.............bt khushi's xplantaion to prove her point was just fantastic(so in directly xplained by u👏)..................and then that kacha -pakka...my good raj's is too much ...........😆......KBC ka host agli bar raj ko banegaye.............bt punishment sirf khushi ke liye hogi😉..........................aur dee kya punishment the........... awwwwwwwwwwww me was ☺️..bt seriously damn beautiful n romantic scene ..........kushi"s relucancy , raj's nauhtiness ........just perfcet⭐️......1.best scene of that part👏................................n really that vart scenes were very nice..........specially wen raj was talking to himself that he should also keep fast for khushi, n then taking promise frm her that if she would feel hungry then she can take food😳................................lekin phir vasu ke bateein😡😡😡...par how raj behaved wid vasu............too good👏.................and beta -beti wali fite's .........aww kya fite thi......so cute.....😳..................n sabse acha goa trip for all couples wow angad - kripa is goona be parents soon👏.finally veer proposed mukti ....his way of proposal was too romantic...n lovely😳.....now wat to say abt our raj- khushi.......just wow.......❤️......finally ab sab theek hogya...........n d last was d most beautiful scene of this whole part😳..emotions, love, need each n every elemest was present there...........amazing dee...ur a damn good writer👏................thanks dee for spending 17 precious hours of urs on this part...............really it was amazing n awesome ..........rocking part........⭐️bt dee nxt part last part..............oh i m gonna miss this lovely story alot.........n five year leap.............i hope bahut khuch naya hoga leap ke baaad😳.specially lots of kids😆😆..............aur plz pihush ko wapas mat lana😡......................deee this is my heartly request plz if possible THEN start a new story ............😳 wid RA😳😳😳



heena yaar no thankuu so much dear.. dear after seeing your comment, mere chehre kii smile aur bhii badii ho gayii hai...see my bhatisi....😃 after reading your comment i'am seriously flying high.... no thankooo yaar... i seriously loved reading your comments....... 🤗 i'll surely try and post the next part soon..😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Guys here is the link of the topic "Feedback For The Fanfic Writers... " please do read the topic & reply.. 😊

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1035345&TPN=1
Edited by sun_423 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: janu_2006

hey surya..gr8 part..cont.sooon



thanks a ton..i'll surely try & continue soon..😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
wow!!wow!!!wow!!!👏

ab is part ke baare mein main kya bataoon...

surya tussi great ho!!! sachi mein....

i mean mindblowing yaar!!!!👏

u wont believe it but i was not able to read it in one go...so i read it in two days....itna bada part maine kahiin nahi dekhi hai....simply superb....

this was a cutie cutie part😳😳😳....but i am sad ki this beautiful fic is gonna end....

i will be waiting eagerly for the next part...Good going


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Posted: 16 years ago

i don't have any words to write yar😕...................................the part was super,fanastic & mindblowing⭐️................................everything was compose like awesome👏................................i love the fight scene the way they both fight with each other in very very small thing...........................like beti hogi yeh betahoga😳.......................i m dreaming ky howkhushi was looking at that night😳...............................eagerly waitng 4 next part ...................................plz con't soon😭

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Posted: 16 years ago


thanku so much..😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mystified

wow!!wow!!!wow!!!👏ab is part ke baare mein main kya bataoon...surya tussi great ho!!! sachi mein....i mean mindblowing yaar!!!!👏u wont believe it but i was not able to read it in one go...so i read it in two days....itna bada part maine kahiin nahi dekhi hai....simply superb....this was a cutie cutie part😳😳😳....but i am sad ki this beautiful fic is gonna end....i will be waiting eagerly for the next part...Good going



thanku so much sofi... i'am seriously over-whelmed after reading your comments.... thanks a ton once again.....😳 i'll try and post
the next part as soon as i can....😊 dear i have a question to ask, have you read my first fanfic, "Zindagi Ke Silsilay"....😊

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