Dil Se Dil Thak on RajeevAamna..Chk pg 150 Imp.. - Page 105

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: yyyy

wow amazing update yaar..u have so nicely potrayed raj's and khushi's feelings...i am very happy that finally piyush is in the jail..yipeee..he deserves that.
That was a super plan planned by raj and his team....and i loved when raj and khushi married again....thank god khushi and raj are together finally.I am happy the way they are taking their relation....friendship is a good start
I enjoyed RK's (raj and khushi) argument over the bed..they were so cute...and i am very happy that u didn't end the part here..i am very much excited to read about goa's trip..it will be fun to see RK and others enjoying after a long time....
This is for u 🤗🤗for writing a superb part and for continuing..continue soon please



neetu dear i'am so happy that you liked the part..... thanku so much dear for such a beautiful comment... i'll surely try and continue soon..😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: rajeevskitu

hey surya! thanks a lot for all the pms......... sori cudn't comment for the b4 2 parts........

thank God! finaly their misunderstandings have cleared........ i kno it's difficult to live again like b4.... but they have started off well....... friendship is the best way to start any relation....and i'm glad that they both have atleast accepted each other as friends......
and i guess piyush will come again for taking revenge....... hope he won't succeed again😕....... and good that tanya is taken to mental aslylum........ she was supposed to be there from the start😆.. cholo! koi baat nahi..... better late than never😉........hehe.......
and i think next part wud be more focused on mukhti and veer......... bcoz sirf vahi bechaare tho pade hoye hai, without being a pair😆............
anyways, good work.......
chalo, catch u later........
bye......
take care



dear thanks a ton... no problem dear i understand..i'am more than happy that you commented... dear fikar not agar piyush wapas bhii aagaya tho raj and his team usse tikhane laga denge.....😉 and i agree tanya apni sahii jagah pohanch gayi... she was always meant to be there in the asylum...😆 your guess is nice..dekhthe hai kya hotha hai.. veer aur mukti ke kismat mein ek doosre ka saath likha hai ya phir ek doosre se judayi..yeh baat next part mein clear ho jayega...😉 i'll try and post the next part soon....😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: angel 16

suri dee firstly thanks for this lovely and minblowing part..dee ur a superb and amzaing writer👏..........i luved this part completely.............dee u av defined each and every line very well😳................and raj wow isse khete hain galti sudharana...........raj is too gud..........kya sabak sikhaya taniya aur piush ko..........maje aagaye,,,,,,,both craps..............and d scene in which raj held khushi when taniya pushes her ........wow that was a beautiful scene.......waise to each and every scene was very natural and complete👏...................aur raj ne kitne ache bateein sunai tanya ki..........kitni buri thi wo😡.ab use pata chale ga bure kam ka bura natiza............kya tamsha hua dono bro-sis ka logo ke samna..........😆.its same tit foe tat...both deserve this...........................aur inally raj khushi r together now.......and that marriage scene..that was so cute............😳😳😳.....shaadi se phele jo pihush ko kaha that was too gud😆😆😆.chalo tanya aur pihush shaadi to paka dekh li.......................lekin phir bhi pihush ne last me raj pe firing ki😡.............iskeliye.........i will give him tight kick😡

i luved all d scenes b/w raj n khushi in there room..................now everything has been soughted b/w them............raj is so cute, loveable, and concering husband..........😳 aur khushi has 4given him👏.................and last scene when raj came back and kissed on his tomy....wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww😳.so cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
dee par precap me aap hamesha dara ti kuon ho...........plz ab koi problem nahi.............and continue soon😳😳😳



heena dear tumhara itna bada comment dekhkar mera dil khush hogaya..sachchi i completely loved your comment... tumne part ke har important angle ke baare mein likha hai..no thankoo yaar for such a wonderful comment....🤗 dear in the coming up parts raj aur khushi ke beech aur bhii sweet aur cute scenes honge...😉 i'll surely try and continue soon..😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: goodkashish

yaar mere pass koi alfaz nahi hai ki kis tarah se tumne jo yeh sab likha.......👏........emotions apni jagah bilkul sahi hai..............pure part to padhte waqt kabhi hotho pe hasi thi to kabhi aankhoin me aanshu....😛....lekin woh aanshu bhi khushi ke the.......😊.......shayad aaj tak ke sabhi parts me se yeh mera sabse favorite raha hoga....⭐️...bahot hi khub likha hai tumne............sabse pehle to muje bahot bura laga jab khushi ko apni aankhoin ke samne raj ki shaadi us tanya ke saath dekhni padi.....😭.....bechari ka dil pal pal mar raha hota....😕....lekin muje sabse jyada khushi tab huyi jab raj Khushi ko rokta hai....😃.......jab raj kehta hai ki khushi kaise uske raj ko kisi ka hone de sakti hai.....👏.....my eyes got wet...😭....raj ke ek ek labz me pata chalta hi uske pyaar ka kitna dard bhara hai ......😳.....kitni taklif huyi use sach janke ......😕....shayad raj ko yeh pastava zindagi bhar rahega...........lekin jis tarah raj ne tanya aur piyush ki band bajayi main kya kahoon......👏.....sirf ek kasar chodi sabne.........in dono ko to sir pe 100 100 joote padne chahiye.....😆.....tanya sach me pagal hi ho gayi hai bar bar ek hi baat dauharti hai...🤢.....lagta hai dimag ka fuse gul ho gaya..........piyush kamina shaadi me koi drug dealing hoti hai.....😡......kitna bewafuk banaya sabne milke....😆......tanya ki sakal dekhne layak thi aur kya himmat hai khushi pe hamla karne ko koshish aur woh bhi raj ke samne......😡....achcha hua use woh thapad padi......👏......kash raj ke pass chabuk hota to aur bhi maza aata......😉......tanya aur piyush ko to shaadi ke havan kund me jala dena chahiye the.......😡......lekin yeh piyush ko panch saal ki hi kyun saza huyi....ise to 1500 saal ki saza honi chahiye thi....😲...lekin yeh bahot achcha kiya ki tanya ko mental hospital bhej diya....😆....i am sure waha pe bhi sabke beech galatfemiyan peda karti hogi..........aur how dare u piyush ki tumne raj pe goli chalayi....😡...kash main waha hoti to main piyush ki jan le leti.....😡....lekin rab ka sukar hai ki goli sirf chuke nikal gayi..................warna pata nahi kya hota...........aur khushi kahi pagal to nahi ho gayi .....😲...kya vasu ki baat pe yakeen karne lagi...........muje lagta hai vasu ko kuch din ke liye haridwar bhej dene chahiye kuch paap kam ho jayenge......😆.......the scecn between raj and khushi was so emotional ki mere teen tissue mere aanshu se bhar gaye........😭........koi kisi se itni mohabbat kaise kar sakta hai jo ki uske dard ki waje ho....😳...lekin kehte hai jaha dard hota hai wahi pyaar hota hai.....❤️....raj tumhe kya laga ki tumhare itne dard dene ke bawjud khushi tumse nafrat karegi agar use nafrat karni hoti to woh tumhare saath shaadi ke dusri bar saat phere kyun leti......☺️........khushi aaj bhi raj se utna hi pyaar karti hai jitna pehle.......❤️..........raj bahot lucky hai ki use khushi jaisi patni mili.......😉....aur yeh log bacho ki tarah kyun lad rahe hai....😆....are tum dono ajnabee thode hi ho jo ek bed pe nahi so ne nahi ja rahe............tum dono pati patni ho aur itna hakk to bed ko bhi banta hai ki woh dono unpe soye,,,aur bed bhi bechara kitne dino se aise sapne dekh raha hoga,,,😍,,,,,i really like jab khushi raj ko office nahi jane deti....👏.......it shows how much khushi cares for raj.........😳............the tie scene was super dupar cute........😳.....raj na baap bannewala hai lekin uski shaitani kam hone ki waje badhti ja rahi hai...😉......yeh raj ka kasoor nahi........yeh sab tie ka kasoor hai....😆.....jo kuch bhi karati rehti hai..............bechare ko office jane ka mann nahi ho raha lekin kya kare kaam to karna padega....😕.....lekin i really like ki jab raj wapas aake apne bache ko goodbye kehta hai...👏...isse pata chalta hai ki raj kitna achcha papa banega,,,,,,,,,,,,woh baby kitna lucky hoga jiske parents raj aur khushi hai..........🤗......songs r just too perfact............yeh dono to jaise pehli bar pyaar karke mile hai aise ek dusre ko miss kar rahe hai.....☺️.....bahot hi achche se ja rahi hai yeh story........ple ple ple ple ple continue.........i cant wait for the goa trip.......kitna maza aayega.......😆..........aur jo tumne preview likha hai ki khub sara romance hoga uske bad to intzaar karna aur muskil ho gaya hai....😳.......ab aur mat tadpao muje........jaldi se agla part likh do...............thank u so muchhhhhhhhhhhh...........

love
kashish

kashish dear tumhara itna bada comment padkar , mera dil garden garden hogaya yaar.. kasam se.. your comments have seriously touched my heart... this is one of the biggest ever comments i have got on dil se dil thak..no thankoo yaar.. you seriously made my day with your comment.. tumhara comment padkar mere aankhon mein aasoo aagaye...🤗 kashish yaar tumhare ideas bade achche the..kii tanya aur piyush ko s agni mein jala dena chahiye..that is a superb idea...😆 waise dear don't worry piyush ke liye maine kuch aur soch rakha hai... and i'am sure all of you will love it....😉 and dear i hope kii tumko yeh fanfic tumhe aage bhii achche lage...😊 i'll try and post the next part as soon as i can...😊😛😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
grt part.thanks for pm.waiting 4 next part eagerly.cont.soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey diiii.!!!! sowieeee!! very busy wid univ. as freshrz ki preparationz n uske baad exams... see itna shaara kamm hum nanhe se second yr k bacho par... chalo leave it..
n ur part was as usuall lovelyyyyy....⭐️ gr88...tnya n piyush ka parda fashh yupieee😳😆😉. wohooo dhoom dhoom laak laak..!!!!
conitnue soon..!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pinky901

grt part.thanks for pm.waiting 4 next part eagerly.cont.soon


thanks a ton..i'll try & continue soon..😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

thanku...😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: rajeev-bigfan

hey diiii.!!!! sowieeee!! very busy wid univ. as freshrz ki preparationz n uske baad exams... see itna shaara kamm hum nanhe se second yr k bacho par... chalo leave it..

n ur part was as usuall lovelyyyyy....⭐️ gr88...tnya n piyush ka parda fashh yupieee😳😆😉. wohooo dhoom dhoom laak laak..!!!!
conitnue soon..!!!


nehu dear.... no sorry yaar..i completely understand..🤗 i'am happy kii you liked the part.. aur main bhii bohat khush hoon kii tanya aur piyush ka parda fash hogaya.. chal even i'll join you & say dhoom dhoom laak laak
dear i'll surely try & continue soon....😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
heyyyyyyyyyyy awesome part yar 👏......................................raj aur khushi ki eyes mein ansoo the..........................so emotional scene ...................................😭..........................but i m very happy raj aur khushi ki sari misunderstanding is clear...............................aur tanya bhi ab out hogi undono ki zindagi se.............................................👏......................kya plan tha raj ka superb tanya tu bechari pagal he hogi................................i can't control my laughing........................bs ab in dono mein koi misunderstanding na aye.................................i hope next part mein bohat masti aur romance hoga........................................plz con't soon

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