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StolenKiss. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
Thx for ur cmmnts guys..:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
Itni sari jodi's ki entry . . . . 😛
inme se my favourite- abhiya 😍
I'm glad kriya is single . . . 😃
oops . . . . St louis gang coming there 😲
tabhi to story badhegi aage 😆
bharat left dancing for vishakha . . . Awww 👏
how can rey act so happy n easy wid stalker . . . Arrgghh 😵
u make me hate them yar 😆
I hope to see . . . Truth comes out fast . . . . 😊
want to see their godamn faces . . . . . & apologies 🤢
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
hey i know i'm late but truely i hate this taani naani WTH does she think of herself n i soo love vishakha n her mom is very right at what she said those ppl rlly don't deserve kriya...rey ki new stalker GF bloody hell and all her friends are just freaks who never came along to even try to understand or find out ki afterall what did actually happen...they call demselves frnzz frnzz my foot...plzz us taani chudail ko rey se door kar do n haan plzzz sad ending mat dena already ek sad ending dekha hai aur nhi hoga...lready cried alot aur aaj u made me cry again n ch 1 was like ausum i mean ausum couples ausum frnzz this is like what i really want rey to get he shud be shattered to pieces n kria should take revenge of each n every tear he has given her...i love u soo much for this girl do continue soon Abshu...update soon n do pm me...wud be waiting like despos...n for a fact mayb the ending now matters less to me n what matters more is rey to pay for everything he did...😡😡😡😡
Edited by sachiarsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74

Seriously my mind just blew off on reading the prologue. 😡

Why r they behaving like such craps.

The gang has behaved so rudely with kria. N rey ko kya hogaya, puppet ho gaya hain uss b**ch 🤢 ke haaton mein. I felt like giving him a tight slap for talking like this to Kria. Yeah they dont deserve a friend like kria. She is too good for them/ Dosti ke naam pe dhabba.

I just wanna struggle that stalker. I wanna puke just thinking about her with rey 🤢 She is so pathetic yaar.

I just love vishaka in that one. A true friend indeed.

Part one is like awesome. The new gang of kria is super cool. I want kria to show them her jhansi ki rani avatar just like when she first came to st louis and stand up against sharon. I like that attitude a lot.

Akhir issi attitude ke keliye rey fell for her. I want Rey to regret everything he told kria And realise that being with taani was his BIGGEST MISTAKE.

Come on kria show them your K effect.

I am just liking this track. Plz update soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
Awesme update. I js hate louians xpct vishaka. Realy dy dnt deserve kria's frndshp. Arghhh taani rey's gf bloody stalker i js hate her. N rey hw easily he ccan frgt hs baatcutter. I wish karan n kria make a couple n d new gang shuld realise wt d meaning of frndshp. Waitng fr update . Tnx fr pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
I dunt want to say anything cux meri weakness ka fayda uthaying Aisha and Kriti.. mujhse accha gift aisha tujhe koi nahi de sakta triple bonaza 😛
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Part 2
Rey: i guess wohi hai..
gang moves towards karan..
Karan: hmm Reyaansh Singhania from St.louis..?
Rey: yea we are from St.louis..
Karan: ohh hi im karan..Karan Saxena..
simmi whispers to sharon..: gosh he is soo cute and hot..
Sharon: yeah dude..
swayam fake coughs..
Karan:wo actually dad ne mujhe send kia hai so come on..
Taani: yea sure..chale rey..
Karan: guys pehle aap sab apne aap ko introduce to karo..
Sharon: aah sure ..im sharon..
Karan: ohh kk ur sharon..
Sharon: tum mujhe jaante..
Karan:ohh no no bas tumhaare baare mai suna tha after all itna accha dance karti ho..
Sharon: thx *blushes*
Swayam: Im swayam Sharon ka BF smirks at karan
Karan: swayam hun..ok so let me guess yeh *points out taani* Taani hai tumhari Sis..
Rey: yeh but..*karan cuts him*
Karan: mujhe ST.Louis ke baare mai sab pata hai ..
Neha: after all famous are college is..
Karan: yea ur right neha..
Vicky whispers to nil: bohut bada kamina lagta hai..
Nil: yeah dude dekh kaise sab isse stare kar rahi hai..rey bol raha tha hot gals par yahaan ke boys bhi kam nahi hai..
Rey: ok Karan mujhe to jaante hi hoge..
Karan: Tumhe to kabhi bhul bhi nahi sakta.
Rey: what..? 😕
Karan: ohh kuch nahi chalo sab wo car hai..
taani: okay..
karan was left behin he pats himself..shabash karan tu to actor nikla...Abhay ko inform kardeta hu..he dials abhay's number..
Abhay: yeah dude bolo..
Karan: Abhay wo aagaye hai..
Abhay: really..?
Karan: yea so tum sab college pohuch jao..
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Boys were at BB court playing basket ball...
Abhay: guys sports day hai 2 din baad yaad hai..?
Maan: haan abhay kaise bhul sakte hai and dis tym hum fir wo sukhi chipkalio ko hara denge..
Arjun: haa bohut over confident horahi gals..
Samraat: iss baar bhi hum jeetenge dude..unhe kuch aate hi nahi hai..
Vishal: bol to tum sahi rahe ho sam but is baar St.Louis ki dance team bhi hogi na..?
Abhay: yea guys...and u knw wat wo kisi bhi tym yahan aate honge...
Samraat: so lets go get ready..and btw gals kahan hai aaj agar tym pe nahi pohche wo log Kirti mam unhe maar dalengi..!
Maan: Gals ki hobby hai late hona..chalo guys lets go..
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Pia: god jaldi chalo geet nahi to aaj kirti maam kaacha chaba dalenge..!
Geet: arey pia chal rahi hu meri heels na tut jaye..
Pia and geet reached atruim..
Pia: thnk god bach gaye aaj to..
Geet: seriously...
Abhay: hey gals...
Pia and Geet: hi..
Maan: haye haaye aaj to bohut ban shan ki aaye ho..line maarne ka irada hai kya louians ko..
Pia: Shut up maan hum aur wo louians ko line maare..
Geet: ye to hamesha hi paagal baate karta hai..
Maan: oye geet chup bhet..
Geet: kya karoge tum agar nahi rahi..?
Arjun: wooaa guys bas ha bas..waise aruhi,kria,vish and khushi kahan hai..?
Kirti mam enters...
Kirti: good morning students..
Evry one: gud mrning mam..
kirti: maine suna dat aaj St.Louis ke student aa rahe hai..
Sam: yeh mam ..
Kirti: hamare college ki Gs,Ags and Cs,Acs kahan hai..?
geet: maam wo ..wo..
Kirti: again late..kitni baar warning di hai maine but koi baat samajh nahi aati 2 din baad sports day hai aur wo gayab hai
Vishal: tabhi mam gals pe bharosa nahi karna chahiye..!
Pia: wht do u mean..?
Just den karan enters wid louians ..
Karan: hey guys, good mrning mam..
Kirti: gud morning..
Karan: mam meet louians..
Kirti *smiles* : welcum guys to St.Lawrence...
Louians: thank u mam..
Geet murmurs: thnk u my foot..
Kirti: aapke baare mai bohut suna hai..I mean aap log ko college Mumbai ke top college mai se aata hai...ok so guys meet our dancers and singers jo iss college ki jaan hai...cux of dem hamara college ka naam roshan hua hai..
Rey: hey guys...
Arjun: hey dude..
Karan: rey ye arjun hai and arjun ye Rey...
Arjun: hmm
Rey: nice to meet u...
( im cutting introduction part )
Khushi and Aruhi came running and panting hard...
Khushi: *huff* sry..*huff mam...
Kirti: u are 5 min late Miss khushi and Aruhi..
Aruhi: mam we are really sry...
louians were staring dem...
Kirti: aap is college ki Gs aur ags ho aapki kitni responsiblities hai pata hai aapko..fir bhi itni late aate ho and see iss college ke CS and Acs ab tak nahi pohchi..
Arjun: gals jo hai..u knw wat guys *to louians* hamara college gals rule karti hai kaam aata hai nahi aur chali Gs Ags banne..
Aruhi: Shut up arjun zyada bol mat samjhe..
Kirti: koi hamare college mai aaya hai aap fir bhi lad rahe ho..
Samraat: gals ke paas ladne ke siva koi kaam bhi nahi hai...
Kirti: what do u mean samraat..?
Samraat: mam i mean saari gals nahi thodi thodi gals..
Swayam: tum sab kaafi intresting ho...
Sharon *stares at swayam * : haan tumhai to sab intresting lagenge hi..after all gals hai..
Aruhi: oo sum one is jealous...well hey guys im aruhi...
Rey: hi aruhi..
Taani *pinches him* : zyaada bol mat samjhe..
rey: *ouch*
Khushi : mam kya kaam tha..?
Kirti: kaam? we are already 15 min late and aapki best frnds ka koi pata nahi..god knws kab aap log tym pe kaam karna seekho gey..
just den dey heard two gals were arguing in d coridoor..
Girl: tum theek se nahi chal sakti ...
Girl 2: Dude mujhe dar lag raha hai miss kirti maar dalengi..
Girl: chal nahi to mai bhi tere kaaran late ho jaongi..
Girl 2: tum jao pehle..
Girl: Fine..come now..
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to be continued...
i knw chota upate tha but kya karu aisha was back of me..but maine abhi bhi faaltu cheeze bhar ke kaam chlaya..😛😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
awesum updte
karan ki acting rocking
bechaare louisans confuse ho gaye😕
swayum jealous coz sharon is drooling over karan😆
phir sharon jealous
st.lawrence k students hai hi aise 😉
girls nd boyz mein world war strt ho gaya
kirti mam k lecture i no kaisa torture hoga
uunwaaahh mummaaa😭
kriya nd vish ki entry karvayi nd wahin rok diya bad grl
wanna see louisans reaction wen dey see kriya
nd i swear i'll smack deir faces if dey say anything to kriya 😡
updte sooonnn
Edited by cookie_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
nice 1


but wanted 2 c hw wuld every1 react wen they c kria n vishaka


update soon
Edited by dildostidance01 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
mumma...cheating!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i hate u ...

u cant stop here...

chal katti
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
This cheating yaar why did you stop there

Anyways nice update

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