IPKKND: It's Not Right - Thread 4: Ch 34-41 - Page 14

Nice update! Can't wait to see what'll happen next!

Ooo interesting update! Now can't waot for their talk

It's so cute how Khushi doesn't pick up the phone or call back when Arnav wants to talk about them, but she does when it comes to her jiji and Akash. 😆 Hopefully Khushi talks to Arnav about what's bugging her though. And soon.

Haha arnav desperate to get khushi speak to him so he found a way which was payal and akash and being the clever guy managed to put her in a spot so they could talk face to face and aww poor khushi is wondering what those other deep emotions are which concerns arnav and also the future of their relationship. Love Abhi his such a great friend but yeah anywho great update and cant wait to read more 😊

Hi.
Last week I found ur index of stories & spent reading it's not right. I gotta say, really wonderful story yaar. From beginning, I really liked all the character. Really loved how u sketched lavanya to help out Khushi and introduced Abhi. Really loved, how Khushi's and Arnavs relationship transformed, over evening meetings after work. Those were too cute. Loved how u'be wrote about
Little events in great detail. & finally Arnav opening about Dhruv.

Coming back to the recent chapter... Small yet very powerful. Now Khushi is getting brothers to come together. Again cute of her. Hope Dhruv isn't going to make it difficult for Arnav.

You know what, pls don't mind..but kind of don't like the Mami Akash Payel marriage convincing track. I hv read other writers & everyone seems to be using the same concept. Wish for once done one would write something different and don't make Mami look like a monster all the time and make Payel nd Akash the weak character all the time.

Hoping u won't take it otherwise for me being critical and hoping I will get my regular pm. Thank u in advance. Keep up the good work

Congrats on the new thread
Arnav and dhruvs relationship seems to be going well LOL
I loved how arnav knew khushi wud want to talk about payal n akashs marriage
Im super excited to see how arnav n khushi conversation goes
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon

great update

Juss read last 3 parts...all the part were nice...wow payel n akash planning to get married...hope druv n them ll play cupid betwn arnie n kushi :)

ARNAV IS SUCH AN OPPORTUNIST... HE TEXTD KHUSHI ABT PAYAL N AKASH FINALLY, KNOWIN THT SHE WUD RESPOND N SHE DID... CHAAALLOOO ARNAV... :P

No.. Poor Khushi having second thoughts about their relationsip! 😔