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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Khushi ... this stuff ... is so redolent of what SwaRon used to be ... u brought back memories of the good old days ... and I can see why Swayam would walk away .. even the strongest of love tires and wears with time and neglect ...

Would love to read if u continue .. I hope u do... 😳

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--Rumeli--

@--Rumeli--

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

loved dis song..n u wrote it out exceptionally touching..do write the next part soon!!wud love to read swaRon dis way..!

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Amazing one Khushi.

Loved it.

Thanks for pm.

Continue karo yeh bhi koi pouchne ki baat hai kya.

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Sneha

@-Snehaa-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

I love this song because it relates to me too :') (I like all her songs actually) but this song is my personal favorite :)

And beautifully written. You should continue :)

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Monal

@littleflaws

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

When I just read the title "Back to December" that song that flashed through me, and some how I knew this OS was gonna be related to it. Which it is. Honestly, I didn't even need to play the song, reading the OS the song was itself playing in my head as the scene unfold. Nicely written. It is true "Silence speaks in Volumes." and this OS is a classic example of that. Would love to read the end of this one. So, yeah do post the next part (:

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ramya26

@ramya26

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

hey i love that song as well knw da lyrics also by heart😊😊

awesome strt...

plz do continue wuld lyk to knw the rest!!!

Edited by ramya26 - 13 years ago

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

That was awesome! Loved it! Please update more!

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

It is beautifulll like the rain. I always feel rain cleanses you top to bottom may be sharon and swayam's relationship will be cleased up for a new begining. Well done khushi, plz update fast.

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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Khushi dear please change the title coz one kriyaansh os is already written by akshu under this name...
Will comment nd like whn i'll b out of this stupid bed rest.

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Interesting 😃
I have'nt heard this song but will surely do . . . . Bcoz of this OS Its a taylor's song 😛
she's back after 3 years & he's very upset 😔
poor guy . . . . . She could have told him 😳
she deserves some punishment too . . . . . But atlast he'll return back to her . . 🤗
ofcourse khushi . . . . . We neea a 2nd part . . . As happy ending 😉