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VasantiLad

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Posted: 13 years ago

You write very well BUT i did not like the way the story went as its THE END - dont want it to end as that ends the dreams - what do we have without DREAMS

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Gunjan Mukherjee

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Posted: 13 years ago

God! I loved it to d core! Aftr arnav said all dat to khushi i've become sadist towards him..he needs to suffer and his RTR shud b thorny n long n difficult..
although m nt much cmfortable wid gory scenes u wrote it quite tastefully..
she bled to death in his arms, took her last breath in his embrace..n d reasn behind her death is he himslf..dats d biggest punishmnt he cn gt alongwith living alone, without khushi..
it has a sad air to it, but i loved it zaynah😊

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vinothini

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome os... u made cry...

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Thanushiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

Dis is too sad man!! Me crying!! Awesome update

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Gals

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Posted: 13 years ago

dat was so sad, u made me cry,
very well written..
thanxx for d pm.

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Pooja

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Posted: 13 years ago

sooo saaad! 😭...but lovely OS!

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kriti_atharv

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Posted: 13 years ago

this was one of those peices which actually made me cry...awsuuum...loved it n thnx 4da pm dear...

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Ishrafan11

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Posted: 13 years ago

Wow nice os so sad kushi died 😭. Thanks for the pm.

Edited by shyperson - 13 years ago

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Kalpana

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Posted: 13 years ago

Great work. I hated the way arnav behaved with khushi. I wish he gets good punishment in the show too.

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S.B.

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome.. i am crying reading this..

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