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charlotte74

@charlotte74

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Beautifully written ... poor Arnav ...he thought this was the best way to bind her to him... but he has only possessed her body... he has possessed her heart ... but what about her soul? he has a long way to go I guess...

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@Flame.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Beautifully written as always 👏

Oh Arnav, You jerk!

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Suhana

@Summer_Rain

Sparkler

+ 11

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

awesome..i loved it alot..👏

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Ain

@OnepoundChic

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

that was mind blowing!

another mistake? cant believe it..arnav 😡

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Madia

@kawkabon

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

loved it. 👏

overjoyed that u wrote a second part.

don't kniw if we can convince u 2 continue but would love it if u do.

I like the fact you initially showed khushi reluctant n backoff because it makes it more realistic and then she lost control.

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wonderblake

@wonderblake

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

wat a fabulous update dr, so arnav has done anothr mistake, hmmm waiting to c wat hapns aftr this wich means i'm inviting you to write another part dr, and thanks fr da pm hon.