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Badtameeez

@Badtameeez

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Yes it was dark but I thought it was magical. Emotions were so well written that I could actually see them playing in my mind. I didn't want Arnav to get away so easily but he has to pay a bigger price now to win her back after this mistake! Ahhh beautiful! 👏

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

that was real beautiful but was heartbreaking

Edited by snoopy84 - 13 years ago

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

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Posted: 13 years ago

#103

Aah so he seduced her!

Loved the update ! ☺️

Awesome work!

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renee

@renee27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

part 1 & 2 awesome... make this an SS will you... i am more than willing to read 😊

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

Awesome OS! Arnav, Arnav, Arnav... What are we going to do with you? *shakes head*

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C3_IF

@C3_IF

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Posted: 13 years ago

#106

wow...tht was extremely well written, i hope ur continuing ths further??? as always looking forward for more😊

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cymateli

@cymateli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#107

wow... beautifuuly written.. khushi should not forgive him easily.. continue soon.. thx for the pm 😊

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mali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#108

in character with ASR, not a a fan of his right now.

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#109

oh my my ASR why do you insist on making things worse for yourself dear
so will there be any other parts to it perhaps
why does he have to be so stupid sometimes