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tsultana

@tsultana

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

my god that was emotional!! U write SOO well! Love reading ur OS'S!! Wil u continue with this? Dyin to see repentence! thanku for the pm.

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trina2010

@trina2010

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Agree, He should not get any chance to grovel anymore. He needs to repent a lot before he gets to see her.

Loved it. Anyway why dont you write an SS based on Arnavs repentance.?

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VasantiLad

@VasantiLad

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Awww- why did you stop - that was beautiful but oh so sad - I was in tears at the end - please carry on with this asap

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angellovergirl

@angellovergirl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

this was so sad!

you described khushi's emotions so beautifully - I felt like crying

I likeyour taken on when he called her just KKG.

Noticed in the epi too

thanks for the pm :)

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Katelyn

@Katelyn

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

This sad and emotional story made me cry!! Great job!! 👍🏼 Also because I'm still very emotional regarding to today's highly charged, sad and intense episode! Thanks for the PM!

Edited by Katelyn - 13 years ago

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Tia.0

@Tia.0

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Perfect. I want ASR to look for her and get desperate every passing second. Can you please write ASR's side too? The guilt, the realization, the desperation?

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thechaigirl

@thechaigirl

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: tia.o
Perfect. I want ASR to look for her and get desperate every passing second. Can you please write ASR's side too? The guilt, the realization, the desperation?

Beautifully written and I second Tia on the request...hopefully the CV's will read and realize the meaning of remorse/realization

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yusam

@yusam

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

SOOO HEART WRENCHING... HE DEF DUSNT DESERVE HER AFTR ALLL SHES GONE THRU N DONE FOR HIM...

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Ramani

@RB81

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

his words were absolute shocker..more than words yet again he didnt give her the opportunity to give her reasons..felt bad for khushi..
to top it off he didnt turn back to see her..
nice OS..