DARK ALLY/LAST PART PAGE 54 - Page 31

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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey,
I for sure choose B, cuz i love this ff and i can't wait to read what appens further and I am for sure waiting eagerly to read ur new ff. U r amazing... reveal soon what have u decided..... me waiting... Bye
Divjot
P.S: awesome part!! Great Job!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
THX WAS AMAZING LOVED IT PLZ CONTINUE SOON 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
i chosse B cause i love ur ff and i can't wait till u start a new one but i'll miss this onee plzz continue sooon
kashish 😃
Edited by kyph05 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
if you go slower... i might go crazy thinking what will happen next.. and anywayz... i love all your fan-fics so i chose B!! I can't wait to read your new one 😳 ... but i'll miss this one! 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
part 21



but before komal could say any thing angad left so komal quickly took the file and put it in angad's desk drawer and ran after angad. it took komal a while to find the gym sence the collage was so big but soon komal found angad in the guy running shirtless and like any girl she couldnt help but stare at angad. komal was about to ask angad what was wrong and that she found the file but then komals eyes hit angads back where see saw nail markes on angads back. and her mouth droped opend in shock all kinds of thoughts ran through komals mind and the thought just wouldnt stop

ko-(dry tone)angad

angad stoped run

a-what(in a pissed off tone)

ko-why do you have nail marks on your back

angad when quite

a-(thinking)ok angad hopefully all thoughs acting classes didnt go to wast

a-its nothing(in a weird tone)

ko-(yelling)what do you mean nothing it looks like a girl did it....were geting married soon and i need to know about your past did you like some one before

angad sat down in a chair and komal sat beside him

ko-(seriouse voice)angad tell me did you like someone before me

a-yes, she ment the world to me

ko-then what happend(in a careing voice)

a-one day i came home and i got a call from dad and he said that he set up my wedding with you and i was crused(pretend to be in a sad tone)i...i just couldnt tell dad no and then one thing lead to another and i soon broke up with my girlfriend who i cared for so much just to keep dad happy and the nail marks was a sign of are love she has one too on her neck with my finger nails...iam realy sorry komal marriage or no marriage i just cant love you as i did with my girlfriend

angad pretends to look like he is about to cry

ko-angad please dont cry i will talk to dillip uncle and tell him iam sure he will understand

a-no he will just get angry at me

ko-then i will tell uncle that i like someone else not you

a-you will do that for me

komal starts getting tears in her eyes

ko-yes i will

a-thanks

komal and angad hug a friendship hug and komal leaves

a-(thinking)iam to good

angad gets up from the chair puts on his shirt and gose back in his office were he sees komal geting her puse

ko-i better go and tell uncle

a-komal i just dont know how to repay you

ko-you dont have to iam your friend right? well friends dont repay each other

a-thanks i will miss you

ko-me to

komal leaves with out telling angad about the file becuase she had totlly forgoten to tell angad because of the shock of hearing angads past story

after komal left the lunch bell rang and kripa and rani desided to go see angad and see if every thing went well

in angads office

r-bhi

a-hey rani kripa come in

angad hugs rani and kiss kripa on the cheek

r-so how did it go

a-perfect

r-aaahhhh iam so happy now i can call my best friend bhabi

kripa starts to blush and angad sees this so he puts his arm around kripa

a-now as soon as collage is over me and kripa can get married

r-well then bhi i was wondering if...

a-no your not marrying him after collage

k-marrying who

a-rani never told you she has a boyfiend

k-realy who is it

rani starts blushing

r-his name is prithiv and he is just one year younger then angad and he is realy nice but angad just dosnt let me be with him

a-your to young to get married and prithiv is to old for you

r-but kripa is my age why dose she get to marry you and your 3 years older then kripa and prithiv is just 2 years older then me so its not fair

k-she dose have a point angad

a-god fine i will talk to dad about it ok

r-aahhhh thanks bhi you rock

kripa and rani then jump in joy

r-we can get married on the same day

k-and then we can have kids that are born on the same day

r-and then we can have gardchilden that are born on the same day

k-and then.....

a-hold on let first try and get through the collage year first

r+k-come on there only one month felt till collage ends just chill

kripa and rani high five and then the end of luch bell rings and both head back to class.

a-bye rani bye kripa

r-bye bhi

rani hugs angad

k-bye angad

kripa kiss angad on the cheek and is about to leave when angad gabes kripa hand

a-kripa give me a full kiss

r-hello iam still here

angad and kripa look at rani and angad lets go of kripas hand starting to turn red

r-ok ok iam going

rani leaves and kripa kiss angad on the lips and runs out of the office. and angad is left smileing

in angad office

angad continues looking though files of students and finishs looking through all the file but finds nothing

a-i dont get it the file should be here some were of that girl maybe prithiv gave me wrong information....but his info is never wrong, maybe i miss place some files angad starts looking through some papers on his desk then starts opening this desk drawers right when he was about to open the drawer with the file in it someone knocks on the office door

a-come in

a guy wearing black jeans and white shirt comes in the office

a-hey prithiv what bring you here

p-no reason i just came by to say hi and to know if you found the girl or not

a-no i missed placed some files and iam looking for them

p-can i help

a-no iam fine

p-if you say so i better get going any way

a-oh prithiv before you go i want to tell you that you can get married to rani after collage is over

p-realy

a-ya

p-dude rock

a-i know i do

p-well i will talk to you later i better go tell my family that i am ready to get married

a-you do that

prithiv leaves and angad gets caught up in doing other work that he was never able to open the drawer with kripas file


hope u like this part
next part comeing soon
comeing up angad ask kripas family for her hand in marrage and ranis and kripas wedding date is fixed
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Posted: 19 years ago
with all the help i will post parts nonstop and start a new fan fic as soon as this one finishs 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome part! it would be really bad if angad found out about kripa on their marriage day!! 😕 😆 😕 continue soon! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
yay!!!! awesome cant wait...brilliant part once again...continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
part 22



prithiv leaves and angad gets caught up in doing other work that he was never able to open the drawer with kripas file

at the end of the day angad was working on paper work all day that he never opend the drawer soon it was time to go and angad deside to drop kripa home and talk to her mother also, so 30 mins before it was time to leave angad gose up to kripas class room and knocks on the door and the teacher opens the door

teacher-sir what are you doing here

the whole class becomes quite seeing the headmaster come through the door

a-kripa and rani are leaveing early with me today so get your things and lets go

teacher-but sir collage rules say no student can leave campus unless your a family member comes and picks them up

a-and those 2 girls are my family, rani is my sister by blood and kripa is my future wife

every one was shocked at what angad just said even rani and kripa were shocked because they never expeted angad to say all that in frount of the whole class. every one in the class starts whispering

teacher-YOU HAVE GONE MAD MR.KHANNA!!!!!

a-just ask kripa and rani who iam to them

teacher-i dont have to because your geting married to komal in a few weeks

kripa and rani start giggleing becuase the teacher dosnt know that komal and angads marrage broke this moring and they found it funny that the teacher didnt know that rani was angads sister

r-uummm bhi(bust out laughing)this is way to funny

now even kripa starts laughing out loud because it was just to funny to see other people all shock and clueless about how rani and kripa know angad

k-angad(laughs)your about to get to....(laughs)...to komal(pretends to be sad)you broke my heart...(laughs)...

r-oohh bhi(jokeing tone)...(laughs)...just to let you know iam not your sister....(laughs)...

angad now cant help but laugh to seeing all the students and teachers so clueless

a-oh sorry i did forget that i dont have a sister.....(laughs).....

kripa and rani grab there books and leave the room laughing with angad. and the whole class in left in shock thinking what just happend

in angad car

r-today was so funny

k-tell me about it

a-the class was all shocked and every thing it was to funny

all three of them laugh finily when all three control them self angad talks

a-kripa i would like that you meet my dad today

k-me ttodaayy

a-ya he is realy nice i know he will just love you

k-bbuutt...ii i mean i..i dont know what to say to him what if i say some thing wrong

r-kripa there is nothing you can say that can upset dad but just dont say anything about are mom when ever that subject comes up dad gets realy ticked in any one talking about are mom

k-ok

angad takes the car to his house and tell kripa and rani to wait out side untill he is finished talking to day

in side the 136 room houes

a-dad, dad

d-angad its good your home komal she left she left a note saying it loves some one else....angad iam realy sorry about all of this

a-acutly that is what i wanted to tell you that iam in love with some one else to

d-what, with who

a-wait here i will call her she is out side

angad gose outside and calls kripa and rani in. kripa comes in the house and is suprised to see dillip

a-dad meet....

d-kripa!

k-omg uncle

kripa gose up to dillip and hugs him

k-i havent seen you in a long time

d-same here it is so nice to see you

a-wait you know dad

k-angad your dad is the one who gave me and tina admition to collage

a-what!!!

d-angad, kripa is a hard working girl i acept you marrage with kripa but first we must go to kripas house and ask her parents if they except your marrage with kripa

a-ok dad we will go today


hope u like this part
next part comeing soon

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