OS: DRUNK ON THE MOON

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varsha komuravelli

@kvarsha

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

awesomeee updateee...

loved the titlee...

fst i thought it dint with story but

after reading last paraa then got ittt...

its so emotionalll and khush ur arnav has his own way of spending time with u😆😆😆...

now seee double trip ur getting 4 days tourr awww...😆😆

thnx for pm😆

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Chandana

@chandana.s

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Wonderfull...Its very cute...😳

Loved it to the core...❤️

Arnav has his own way to spent time...😉

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Applebee

@Applebee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: vandana323
first first first

SITS AND EDITS

so, FIRST. YES, I won the race!!!! 😆

Bingala, i loved the story. Sitting straight on a recliner, typing away is so Arnav. When you manage to notice these tiny quirks, i wonder if Arnav lives with you or what!! Now THAT would be a dream come true, wouldn't it? hahahaha!!

The song is again one of my favourites. If truth be told, its one of the few things my pa and me have in common. So now you know the sentimental value.

How odd. My dad was away on tour, and i was missing him today, listening to this song. And then you sent me a pm, with "Drunk on the moon" as the N/B. Telepathy or WHAT??

What I love about the story is that you manage to keep the essence of the characters alive, by the tiny things they do; whether it be staring at the moon, or sitting on a recliner poker straight :D

Thankyou for the pm!!!

Keep writing. I live for those.

Love,
V

Now wouldn't that be something? 😆 No. I have my guy whose quirks and characteristics I use in all my stories. Everything you see in Arnav has something of him. Which doesn't imply he's anything like him, at all really 😛 But the quirks in a OS. The dressing style in one OS. The OCD in the other. The ways of handling confrontations. More or less. LOL! I'm glad that you liked the OS and that it reminded you of your dad. Hearing that made me happy as well!

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Applebee

@Applebee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: -Shobhu21-
You are just tooo good at these OSs Bingo 😉 (hope you dont mind me calling you that)

And this one was special and perfect in its own way !!

Arnav and Khushi home alone always means trouble or guttery thoughts or pleasing the other !!
And this one was so different !! Khushi feeling all left alone !! Aww !! My sweet poor baby !! She does so much of work, Arnav should have come before !! Shouldnt let her feel so alone !!

And Arnav !! Haaan !! He's a bichara tooo !!
Wanting to spend time with her. but alas as he puts it responsibilities man !!
Loved the OS !1

And then the way he suprises her !! To the himalayas to see the moon !! I bet only he can do that !! And Im sure Khushi would probably be cuddling him down to death !!😆

Bingo? LOL! That's something I never thought I'd be called. Call me anything you like. Bingala's not my name anyway 😆 I am glad that you liked it. I just wanted to show that passion probably isn't the only side of love. There would be a lot of that but sometimes loneliness comes along with it! 😆 Plus, I LOVED Soulitude at the Himalayas. It's an amazing Resort 😆

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Manitaa

@Manitaa

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

When do you find the time or the idea to write? 😕

But that was romantic.. Enjoyed it. Heard the song with the bald-head.. *shaking head in frustration*

My life sucks 😭

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Gargee

@Gargee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

I want an Arnav of my own. B! Find me one!! Please!

Sigh! 😍 I wanna go and watch the moon and the stars from the Himalayas too! You know, you're the reason I'm gonna have such unreasonably high expectations from my Man.

But Oh Well! You, B, are wonderful. And this one was just as wonderful, beautiful and great. Nice Work Babe!😃

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Applebee

@Applebee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Gargee
I want an Arnav of my own. B! Find me one!! Please!

Sigh! 😍 I wanna go and watch the moon and the stars from the Himalayas too! You know, you're the reason I'm gonna have such unreasonably high expectations from my Man.

But Oh Well! You, B, are wonderful. And this one was just as wonderful, beautiful and great. Nice Work Babe!😃

AAAH! You're back! Or... well, settled at least! The Eagle's landed! Thanks so much hon! I missed you! 😳