FF: The games we play Thread 3 - Chapter 88 Pg 43

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Sarina2012

@Sarina2012

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Hai hai.. Look who has updated!

Shyam is surely losing it. It's amazing how calm n composed khushi has become. Her effort to save her child in just every situation hit a chord. Jais' analysis of Arnav and his responsibilities was touching. A man who really loves the family as his own. Our Jais rocks.

I m sure him n Arnav will find khushi. Fingers crossed.

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

That's it right?!

You've only written until part 85?!?

Oh my f**king bloody god, I tell you!!

I could get fired so easily, sitting and reading your FF with an obsession which would put your Shyam to shame!! 🤔

And I ain't jokin'!! 😳

PM me??? Pwease??? 😳

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

man this is why I completely am in love with your writing! why I became addicted and obsessed with this FF!

brilliant! seriously amazing!!! you keep leaving us hanging at the worst of moments! I am just going to sit and wait with Khushi for you to continue hopefully SOON!

I could picture exactly how Arnav was being viewed by Dev... how strong and controlled and unable to do anything. How helpless everyone might have been. I am amazed at how perfectly you can illustrate feelings and emotions and actions!

So happy for this update!!! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Finally an update! And what an update!

That was brilliant!

Khushi's strength to face Shyam without any fear!

Dev's realization of Arnav's true nature and his importance in the Raizada family.

Shyam's sheer madness for... who knows what. Initially he wanted Khushi but now it just seems he wants to finish what he started and get it done with.

Lovely B, continue soon. Please?

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SunshineGirl6

@SunshineGirl6

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Read till chap 46 ..are u freaking kiddin me????Gal u killed me vid this intense passionate ff...Loving it till nowww...vil read aage and comment again !!!

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rashgirl000

@rashgirl000

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

o hell. this is not good.

not good at all.

hope they reach khushi on time.

loved dev's realization of arnav's charachter.

and the creep finally lost it.

hope he does not do any major damage.

who am i kidding. already killed lots of people.

let me rephrase. hope he does not do any further damage.

as a final note. loved the update.😉

Edited by rashgirl000 - 13 years ago

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Vee

@reflorated

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Oyyi!

Whenz the youz the updatingzz? Telzz me pliss. (lol, auto correct changed pliss to piss 🤣 )

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ua91

@ua91

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

I cannot even begin to tell you how much in love with your story I am. I just went through a reading marathon! Truly amazing. And thank you for providing more sensible interpretations of the characters than the CVs seem to be providing nowadays. I especially love the fact that you're showing Shyam as a psycho as only that would explain some of his more nefarious plans in the show no matter how ridiculous they may seem. Your characterization of Shyam would explain his behavior today. I commend your story and your writing style.