FF: The games we play Thread 3 - Chapter 88 Pg 43

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norolim

@norolim

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

YOU DID UPDATE!

Thanks so much B 😊 I actually read the entire story [prior to this chapter] in one.freaking.day.

Yeah, thats how good of a writer you are. [haven't I mentioned that like 500-freaking times??]

On the chapter.

Brilliant. Wonderfully done and written. Calm but underlying currents.

f**k Shyam.

Continue soon! And I mean soon -..-

Cheers, Avi.

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

That was sooo creepy. Loved how you drew out the predicament that Khushi is in, her inherent strength and calmness. even in this state she is not afraid for herself but worried about her child and if anything happens, what it will do to Arnav.

You described Shyam's madness so perfectly and highlighted Arnav's burdens. what a man!!!!!

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CravingKhana

@CravingKhana

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

almost missed it...marking pg to read later...

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sur91

@sur91

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

That was quite infact very thrilling. A chill just ran down my spine reading abt Shyam and what possible threat he can become to khushi and her child.
Poor arnav, he is really holding it all together but how long will he be able to do so, I don't even wanna think

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Omg creepy shaym...bet the pagal guy was his father...amazing update...keep it up

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

What a chilling update B! Shivers ran down my spine reading about Shyam's demeanor. He literally is scary 😲 What mistake did he make allowing Jais & Arnav to track him down. Admired Khushi's stoic handling of the situation, extreme fear can really have amazing effects on people... She will try to delay Shyam's assault as much as possible at the same time try & find a method to alert Arnav about her whereabouts somehow (I hope).

Please update soon, this is too much of a cliffhanger to leave us dangling for long. Want to see this creep killed ASAP.

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Manju

@Drwho

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Hey managed to log in inspite of all the power outages and signal problems and sundry that plague India!! Distressing update to an absolutely amazing story.

Jai's respect for Arnav grows and so does mine for you by leaps and bounds!!

Wonder if somehow Khushi's inherently sharp mind will figure out a clue to send to Arnav and Jai since she has already surmised, a few things about her location.

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SunshineGirl6

@SunshineGirl6

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Ufff loved this FF..vil read soon and comment !!!

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ava23

@ava23

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#79

ohhh yayyy we got a update atlast .. about time... nyhooo abt the chapter... loved how you described shyam an insane, unfocused eyed psycho... i love the courage of khushi facing the monster... nd how arnav is still the pillar in the midst of crisis... i hope jais nd arnav will be able to find the snake soon...

keep up the gd work nd plzz dont keep us hanging 4 long this time around

p.s: thanx 4 da pm