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charlotte74

@charlotte74

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#671

Loved it... Sorry for the late response...this is real romance

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sunny_sarun

@sunny_sarun

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#672

awww i just found this ff and its so cute!!!
i love a flustered ASR 😛
plz plz give me a pm when u update next

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#673

Prologue:

Now this is interesting...

He is forced to attend a family trip instead of terrorising his employees :-D

The dupatta has a major role to play ;)

Arnav is frustrated and well Khushi has just appeared. Lets see what happens next :-)

off to read chapter 1 :-)

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#674

Chapter 1

I like this story for two reasons:

a. There is a freshness to it. I cant explain it :-P

b. It is from Arnav's perspective. We dont have many stories which are from his perspective and this one is :-D

So it was indeed love at first sight. Of course the description that you have very well given may make any guy fall for the girl. And ASR falling in love at first sight-sabko bataane ka badi ;)

Who is this companion?

Off to read the next chapter :-)

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#675

Chapter 2

So is Shyam good? Sorry that was the first thing I could think of :-P

So Arnav is Pareshan :-D

The entire wedding set up along with the situation they are in makes the story all the more exciting.

I would have given a longer comment but off to read the next chapter :-D

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nj.123

@nj.123

Explorer

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#676

I heaved a HUGE sigh of relief when I read that Khushi isn't Karan's fiance, so now that Arnav has her number and they are in the same guest house I really really can't wait to know what sparks up between these two. You have a magical way of writing, I loved reading this!😊

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#677

Chapter 3

Oh no!

Yes just two words of comment. If the 4th chapter makes me happy then you will get a longer comment ;)

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#678

Chapter 4

Since it is difficult for me to comment on the blog, I prefer to comment here :)

Arnav ki khushi agar Khushi se hai to hamari khushi bhi unki ussi khushi ki Khushi mei hai :-P

Thank God that Karan ki khushi Arnav ki Khushi mei nahi hai magar Khushi ki khushi mei hai :-D

Yay he has her number. She doesnt dislike him. He is not a complete jerk. He made her smile. He in turn smiled :-)

Since it is a wedding, we can get a lot of moments together :-D Talk to her Arnav. Be a man

Since I have now caught up with all the parts, I can now comment as and when you update. If I am late in commenting, it doesnt mean that I will not comment. I will comment for sure :-)

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insanelycrazy

@insanelycrazy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#679

hahahhhaahha arnav already lattoo ho gaya! its soo funny when somebody as arrogant like him who is always ready with a quick comeback goes speech less and doesn't know what to say! bwahahahahha i'm laughing like an idiot abhi. 🤣 just imagining his expressions. and mean khushi's awesome! just some1 to give him a takkar! i hope they fight alot :D :D arnav babua is chant getting her number like that! so proud *wipes a tear in a dramatic style* :')

i was laughing, smiling blushing and what not while reading the whole update, and hitting my forehead with my palm at arnav's idiocities! jeesh my room mate is officially gonna call me mental! lol.. i have this stupid smile on my face which just refuses to budge! khushi-arnav both ka antics are adorable in thsi! heehehehee

adorable and really v v v v v cute updates !! loved them all :D i love karan btw! and shyaaam too! he sees everything around him doesn't he?! mind reader he is! 😃

p.s. i just by chance read your comments on the first page of chapter 4, and NOOO!!!!!!!! you're not a terrible writer and your stories have the right pace! and with this story, you're creating this really amazing and beautiful imagery! i swear i'd never say it if it weren't true. don't be an idiot(i'm blunt. sorry :P ) and think that your writing is anything less den awesome! some people are just retards who are lazy ! i swear if your story wasn't as good as it is, i or for the matter of fact nobody would be reading them!! and you have alot of people who love your work and comment and appreciate the fiction you create! its awesome *swear swear* ^_^