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Posted: 12 years ago
My place😈-

First of all- Hum bhi tum se I love U ,Dammit🤗❤️😆
I cant believe my fate!! I was just going to sleep thought U wdnt update today,
Now I got a Update!!!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️
Yapppy Me 2nd🥳
U know when I saw ur update, I shouted so loud that my mom woke up & she came to the this conclusion' I am now gone hayware', little did she know abt my love of this FF, which actually has made me a 'Stalker'😃

Now lets come to the Party- Brilliant Update, Bud👏
That conversation between Arshi was splendid & much needed😃
Actually feeling bad for Arnav- victim of the tragic fate😭
He became a bad by doing a good for Khalid!! This is thue for many A Real Gangstar actually!!
Loved that Khushi didnt leave him, Brave Girl! I Love & Respect her even more now👍🏼 She managed to love that 'Arnav' despite knowing the that Cold Arnav' 😃
Aww! Arnav tries to seek shelter in Abbas!! Grrr!😡 What an irony!!!😲
That man was the***** dad of him, that he didnt want to know of; if only he knew!!!
Now I want to kill that Shyam! Ghatya Insaan😡
Felt Sorry For Aman! Actually he is in more worse situation than Arnav is😔
Arnav has Khushi, But Aman dsnt have any1 with him right now!!
Pls Aman- tell Arnav about all this😔
Sooo the next update will b bloodbath!???

Thank U very much for this Update😃
Hugs & Love u a lottt😃
Edited by coronapsyche - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am so so happy that Arnav and Khushi had that heartfelt conversation buddy. They are talking very openly and are more comfortable with each other now! It shows how deep their relationship is. But I guess Khushi will be terrified of him when she learns that it was Arnav who killed Karthik :/

And Aman... My sympathies are with him! He is trapped in such a cruel situation.

P.S: Think about the shower scene bey <3


Edited by loveydovey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Love you more molten🤗

So you annoyed??? And when you are annoyed you give quick updates'.???? Thanks buddy for sharing such an important thing with us😆😈

And after reading your confession I was like I should make you wait for my comment and that too after reserving the place😈 oh with this I remembered am on first page after ages I so missed to comment early

this was supposed to have a "shower sex scene" and you ended up giving us all this gang conversation What the and let me confess I actually skipped the word supposed and after reading *ahem* shower sex scene *ahem* I thought you are telling us this before hand to make readers discrimination'.. hehehehehe '.. but when I read "apologies" I was like 😭 now the request to you chaddi buddies, make her pay for not giving us the hot steamy shower 🤪 I want to know one thing what are the technical difficulties 😕😆😉 yeah yeah my mind in total gutter even before reading your advice to have fun in our imagination'.. but trust me lava ji we can't enjoy our own wild imagination you know how innocent your readers are 😆🤣 we want your update to sail our mind in gutter land 😈and maybe they were so eager to talk about that gang stuff that they decided to get their shower later''. Who knows'..😉

and now the update😃

Khalid is such a sweet person I wonder how he didn't feel guilty to be a criminal'.. I guess this was because of his messed up love life'.Aarti left, his brother cheated on his lady love , and when she was ready to be with him the cruel fate was there to part them'. I so wonder, did he ever had a chance to be happy with some other girl'.???? I am loving this Khalid'. He went through a lot of things in his life but I so want him to make Arnav realize that money can't buy everything' if that was the case he ,khalid Bhai, must be living a happy life''

and wow the way you brought how helpful Khalid was to Arnav is just superb'.he actually did a lot of favors to our Arnav'..

I liked that Khushi brought the topic of Aman' Arnav has totally forgotten him'.. and kudos to you Khushi that you have a good sense of judging people'. She misses her best friend' awe'.. lucky lavanya'.. and she is also ready to sell her bua ji's house just to make Arnav to quit the criminal world'.. that's so sweet of her' isn't she behaving a sweet innocent child who is trying to bribe some elder with her chocolate bar'.. loved her innocent thinking' and thumbs up for making Arnav as practical as possible'. He is not thinking of quitting but changing his rank in gang'.👏👏⭐️⭐️

Arnav baby you are so wrong about Abbas' he can't be your safe heaven'. NEVER'.. you are living in fool's paradise'. Why can't you see his intentions'. But I can't blame you'. Then who should I blame for this???? Tell me molten???? No more illusions'.. no more sadness'. And please don't give us heart attacks by all this, "I cannot guarantee you my life. I know I'm very selfish for wanting you, in spite of this truth. But I couldn't stop myself from falling in love with you."

Now what the hell was that," But these two innocent souls had no idea what the cruel fate had in store for them. A storm larger than ever was just brewing at the corner of their lives and they were absolutely oblivious to it. " why on earth they need to suffer more'. Don't they have a right to be happy and live in peace'. Please can't you forget for a while that you named this story ,"MIRAGE"

And now Aman'.so he is back in the story'.. finish him off'. Did you actually write it???? I mean how can you make Arnav die' how can you do this to innocent Khushi????😡 Am begging you don't do this, don't make him die, just forget about begging' don't you dare to make that Das guy succeeded in his any task'..😈 I guess I have more faith on Aman than you molten😉😆

I so loved the fact that Abbas didn't get a single penny from his father and on the other hand Khalid is so kind to Arnav that he actually nominated him in his will'.. does he know by any chance that Arnav is Aarti's son???

Lovely update but it could have been wonderful if the request was fulfilled'..you know friends' demand should always be fullfilled so maybe in the coming chapters we will have something like that... and you know what, the in between kisses during their conversation was felt like a compensation of not giving a hot shower to them 😉😛😆😆😆

Edited by lilly205 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update.. loved it.. I hope nothing bad happens to Arnav.. please continue soon!!
Edited by Saniiii - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago




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shyam is a bast***
poor arnav has many rivals then he thinks
anyways loved it and plzzz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant update...I am just so scared for arnav...plz plz don't kill him,poor Khushi she's gonna be so heart broken...for the first time I won't be waiting for the next part out of pure fear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
things are getting scary dark now, i wonder how things will plan out :/
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow great...aman don't betray ur friend yaar...loved khushi and arnie's conversation...waiting for next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi
honey it was a fantastic update, thank-you for so much arhi!
I love hhow their relationship has developed! the understanding, though breaks my heart, is beautiful and heart touching! I can't help but feel bad for khushi! maybe it is her fate, but accepting the fact that someone you love may not live to show you his face tomorrow is scary, the idea would haunt anyone! its like having someone close to you catch a deadly disease and you never know if the next time you visit the persob would be there or not!
I understand its a complicated story but couldn't there be a miracle? why cant aman just tell arnav the truth? it will make things so much easier .it breaks my heart to imagine what aman must be going through and what trauma arnav will bear once he comes face to fave with his best friends situation .

cheers
Sonia
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Posted: 12 years ago
What a update ...love the relationship between arnav and kushi ...hope aman cum up with a master plan...cant wait for shaym to be tourched...continue soon

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