Love you more molten🤗
So you annoyed??? And when you are annoyed you give quick updates'.???? Thanks buddy for sharing such an important thing with us😆😈
And after reading your confession I was like I should make you wait for my comment and that too after reserving the place😈 oh with this I remembered am on first page after ages I so missed to comment early
this was supposed to have a "shower sex scene" and you ended up giving us all this gang conversation What the and let me confess I actually skipped the word supposed and after reading *ahem* shower sex scene *ahem* I thought you are telling us this before hand to make readers discrimination'.. hehehehehe '.. but when I read "apologies" I was like 😭 now the request to you chaddi buddies, make her pay for not giving us the hot steamy shower 🤪 I want to know one thing what are the technical difficulties 😕😆😉 yeah yeah my mind in total gutter even before reading your advice to have fun in our imagination'.. but trust me lava ji we can't enjoy our own wild imagination you know how innocent your readers are 😆🤣 we want your update to sail our mind in gutter land 😈and maybe they were so eager to talk about that gang stuff that they decided to get their shower later''. Who knows'..😉
and now the update😃
Khalid is such a sweet person I wonder how he didn't feel guilty to be a criminal'.. I guess this was because of his messed up love life'.Aarti left, his brother cheated on his lady love , and when she was ready to be with him the cruel fate was there to part them'. I so wonder, did he ever had a chance to be happy with some other girl'.???? I am loving this Khalid'. He went through a lot of things in his life but I so want him to make Arnav realize that money can't buy everything' if that was the case he ,khalid Bhai, must be living a happy life''
and wow the way you brought how helpful Khalid was to Arnav is just superb'.he actually did a lot of favors to our Arnav'..
I liked that Khushi brought the topic of Aman' Arnav has totally forgotten him'.. and kudos to you Khushi that you have a good sense of judging people'. She misses her best friend' awe'.. lucky lavanya'.. and she is also ready to sell her bua ji's house just to make Arnav to quit the criminal world'.. that's so sweet of her' isn't she behaving a sweet innocent child who is trying to bribe some elder with her chocolate bar'.. loved her innocent thinking' and thumbs up for making Arnav as practical as possible'. He is not thinking of quitting but changing his rank in gang'.👏👏⭐️⭐️
Arnav baby you are so wrong about Abbas' he can't be your safe heaven'. NEVER'.. you are living in fool's paradise'. Why can't you see his intentions'. But I can't blame you'. Then who should I blame for this???? Tell me molten???? No more illusions'.. no more sadness'. And please don't give us heart attacks by all this, "I cannot guarantee you my life. I know I'm very selfish for wanting you, in spite of this truth. But I couldn't stop myself from falling in love with you."
Now what the hell was that," But these two innocent souls had no idea what the cruel fate had in store for them. A storm larger than ever was just brewing at the corner of their lives and they were absolutely oblivious to it. " why on earth they need to suffer more'. Don't they have a right to be happy and live in peace'. Please can't you forget for a while that you named this story ,"MIRAGE"
And now Aman'.so he is back in the story'.. finish him off'. Did you actually write it???? I mean how can you make Arnav die' how can you do this to innocent Khushi????😡 Am begging you don't do this, don't make him die, just forget about begging' don't you dare to make that Das guy succeeded in his any task'..😈 I guess I have more faith on Aman than you molten😉😆
I so loved the fact that Abbas didn't get a single penny from his father and on the other hand Khalid is so kind to Arnav that he actually nominated him in his will'.. does he know by any chance that Arnav is Aarti's son???
Lovely update but it could have been wonderful if the request was fulfilled'..you know friends' demand should always be fullfilled so maybe in the coming chapters we will have something like that... and you know what, the in between kisses during their conversation was felt like a compensation of not giving a hot shower to them 😉😛😆😆😆
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