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Posted: 12 years ago
I was waiting for an update for this for a long time.

Worth wait. Kushi forgave hi, a biggest thing for both of them, isn't it?

The plans are set in action now? To destroy Khalid and Arnav. I just want to know what would happen when Arnav gets to know Abbas is his father and the man who killed his mom!
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was a beautiful update! 😊
Khushi can never hate him can she? I am so happy that they are together now! I cried so badly while reading their conversation! I felt the love Khushi has for Arnav! I hardly ever cry for stories. But this was one of the story which moved me! :)
But I hope Arnav remains safe. So many people are behind him!
I hope khushi doesn't suffer any more! Poor girl has suffered a lot.
Waiting for Khalid to know about Arnav! I hope he protects Arnav and Frees him out of this miserable life he is leading.
Great update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
khushi forgave him!! wooow i'm so happy


i really love this update!! and love you a lot

keep rocking
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Posted: 12 years ago
congratulations on the half century
I so knew this FF would have a long way to go and here the 50 chapter and atleast 5 more chapters to come 😃 wow wow just wow 👏👏👏
when you told that this FF would have 45 chapters i was actually shocked and feared that you might end it abruptly and i shared my fear with you too... and i so wish that you will have to make another thread for this FF... so please allow us to spam this thread 😉😛😈
you are so unlike other writers... others want to open as many threads as they can but here you are satisfied only with three threads is it something like less comments mean less time required to read them??? and why don't you threat your readers to comment 😉 am sure if you do so you will have atleast 30 pages of comment for your each update...
Now the update 😊 loved each and every bit of it 😃
i don't know why but I thoroughly enjoyed reading abbas's part 😃 whatever he recieved in his life is actually the result of his bad deeds the person who cant make others happy has no right to get any kind of happiness and i doubt he has a good side unlike the ither characters of your FF... it's just a start Abbas and am sure the writer will make you suffer like hell (are you getting my point molten 😉)and the way his dad tricked him i so loved the idea and he didn't get a single penny from his father in law...😆 i guess he thought that's the only thing which could force his son in law to stick to his ugly wife 😉😆 but am scared at the end what is he cooking up in his head???am clueless 😕 please don't do anything which may bring another heartbreak to Arnav 😭 and i guess thats the first time am writing such a long comment about Abbas 😆
oh My God 😲 the way you make Khushi wait for him at his doorsteps is exactly im imaging since your last update... can you believe that???? and i was actually roaming in my dreams in dark and scary Delhi streets in search of Arnav😳 yeah am kind of as much worried for her Arnav as was Khushi herself 😛,"At that moment, she realised that she was ready to do anything for Arnav.

Her Arnav." I so loved this line 😊

Arnav was wondering why he was living this life, all alone with no purpose and person to live... me wondering the same :( i mean there are three person's Aman, Akash and then Khushi in his life to whom he was introduced as a good person by his fate... he saved Akash's life so for Akash he is good until he came to know he shares a blood relation with him... and Khushi consider him as good person until she came to know he is a criminal... why can't they remember his good side when the reality strike them...??? that's the cruel fate of him...i guess Aman is the best among them... he knows his condition because he has more or less the same troubled past... the hunger that turned them into criminals...😭😭
she was mad at him and he was even angrier than her... oh molten what a range of emotions you portrayed 👏 he was angry and she was scared but still he managed to think that he cant let her go alone at that time of night 😃
"Leave me!" he said,
"Shut up!" she said,
that is so sweet and yes she is so ready to do anything for his Arnav... awe you made me cry with Arnav 😭😭
their ride to her house was sad and lovely at the same time... she forced him to come inside and also made him eat... am sure her each kiss made him feel better... he was behaving just like a small scared kid who wanted an assurance that he is needed by someome and am glad Khushi was there to ease his pain... he is never a man of words so Khushi took that responsibility as always... am happy more than Arnav that Khushi is going to give him a second chance 😳 she also told him that she used to sleep hugging that pikachu awww ⭐️
Das guy have no idea of Khalid Bhai's power 😆😆😆 he need to work really hard to get his place... he must be be a child infront of Khalid bhai 😛
at the end am hoping that with all these gloomy and sad things happening in our Arnav's life there will be a happy ending because i heard something like that every dark tunnel has a light at the end 😉 so you better give us light molten
love you darling 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
arnav and khushi's part was fabulous
emotions described perfectly
abbas is cheating his bro
so many twists
loving it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just caught up with the last 5-6 chapters. and mind blowing portrayal of all the emotions. Fantastic update.





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Posted: 12 years ago
ArHi scene in this update was beautiful. I was in tears! It was so them to shout at each other. 😆😆 I'm glad Khushi decided to give him a second chance! OK, the last bit scared the hell out of me! Update soon! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
dat was an awesome update..
so khushi forgave arnav..dats gr8..
loved it..
continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesomeee
Loved it!!!
Yay!! Khushi forgive arnav
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Posted: 12 years ago
just finished reading this FF and its absolutely mind-blowing , caught me up with it
do add me in your PM list and cont soon

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