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mysterious_maze

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: arushi05
Yaar rachel jaldi se update krke ek chapter de do na. My patience level is decreasing day by day waiting for the update. Update soon!

your patience level is decreasing and mine is almost finished

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Posted: 13 years ago

#362

Arnav ki maa 😲 OMG fab update

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Targaryen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#363

Ok so I have at last started to read your FF 😃

I wanted to give my feedback after the first chapter itself but the thread was closed 😡

So feedback of chapter 1 and 2:

You know when I started to read I thought is was playing out in Dubai ;) so was kinda shocked when I read Delhi. And the atmosphere of the first part was so tense. But everything suddenly changed when Khushi popped in 😆 It was like a ray of sunshine amidst the darkness.

And she had pull out the bullet???!!! I would've fainted at a sight like that ;) so Khushi has the bullet eh? Mannat ki Chabis in the show and bullets in your FF 🤣

I liked the first to chaps :) u set out the basic foundations well. I'm still reading tonight but I will see if I have the patience to give feedback after every two chapters ;)

Edited by loveydovey - 13 years ago

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Targaryen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#364

Chapter 3 and 4:

I love love love lavanya's and khushi's friendship! It seems so pure. I hope it is and you don't screw it up during the story ;)

And Arnav's and khsuhi's life are so different :O the mood, atmosphere everything is so different. While Khushi dreams about her prince charming Arnav still has nightmares about his past. I want to know how they fall in love and if Khushi will be able to change Arnav :)

Ok I'm back to reading :P

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Targaryen

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Yoyoyoy I'm loving it

Finished reading chapter eight and Arnav's dialogue ' never lust after your been' was epic 🤣

Didn't comment before because I was too intrigued in reading the story :P

This is gonna be fun!!!

Edited by loveydovey - 13 years ago

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Targaryen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#366

Ok I finished reading chapter nine. What is Arnav doing? Grr I'm not liking it that lavanya is really falling for him :S

But needless to say I loved arhis encounter in the woods ;)

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Targaryen

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Chapter 10:

So la is breaking up with karthik so that she can get together with Arnav :S hmm donno where this is leading to!

But I loved the scene where Khushi plays with the water! She is such a sunshine in the middle of the thrilling story :D the thing with the fountain was really well described rachel :) booty- fool :P

And Arnav is kind of stalking her?! ;) reminds me of another very famous character. Think think you know whom I mean :P

Khushi is effecting him big time isn't she?! But hope they have a conversation soon!

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Targaryen

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Chapter 11:

What was that 🤪

And you were not sure if I would like this FF?? Duh ok my mind is completely blank now after that *ahem* part but I'd gladly flush that cellphone in my toilet 😡 But I hope Arnav handles it well when he falls in love with Khushi. This is getting too complicated with la hanging over their heads :S

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Targaryen

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Chapter 12:

*facepalm*

What is Arnav doing?! -.-

And akash's name is akash 'Singh raizada'?! What is Arnav's name then? I'm puzzled. Are they stepbrothers?! Because u cannot name Arnav with any other name than ASR 😆 Hmm so maybe Arnav's father ditched his first wife who happened to be Arnav's mother, but moved to Delhi alone and married akash's mother?! I donno I better continue with my reading ;)

Edited by loveydovey - 13 years ago