Did I ever tell you that you are one amazing, incredible and mind blowing writer? You are exceptional girl, indeed remarkably good at writing. 🤗
The update is superb just fantabulous. The emptiness in Khushi's life after losing the two most important people of her life, the ray of hope in Akash's life after seeing Khushi, the devastated Arnav by remembering Khushi's last words to him, the two faced Abass hiding his fury behind his mask and at the end Khalid Bhai in his late fifties remembering his teen age crush that has definitely lightened up his eyes with those old romantic memories.
I can picture all the scenes only because you have written it beautifully and I cried for three persons'
Khushi was missing him like anything but yeah she is a strong girl and wants to be strong to forget his memories. But you simply can't Khushi'.
For Arnav it seemed that time has frozen when she walked off his life and the echoes of her last words, "I can't possibly love you anymore" are continuous distraction for him, maybe this will lead to distract him during his mission and maybe he will end up hurting himself just like he has hurt his hand. "Begging for his fate to be merciful to him, just this onetime" this line completely shows his helplessness.
Yeah this time, I cried for Khalid bhai too. I have a feeling he never was a bad guy it was his bad luck that he ended up being a head of some mafia business, and surely this will lead him to help his son to lead a good life may be by sacrificing his life. So he was a shooting champion, certainly this was the reason behind his being in mafia business.
Abass is a man with layers, I really can't judge him. But I guess, he is a guy with lots of secrets. He knows everything and he is the reason behind why they all have messed up lives.
And you know what before reading the update I read the comment asking was the girl Arnav's mom??? And the first time I was more eager to read the Khalid bhai's part than anything else in the update. From the memories it seems that the girl belonged to a well-off family and the instant question popped in my mind was why she didn't come to her family when Khalid bhai left her or she left him??? Did she run off her house for him??? Why didn't she tell nanna anything about her family ??? Why didn't she bring Arnav to her family if she had any idea of losing her life while coming back to Delhi??? Was she related to Hari kyshup in any way??? Well I guess I should just leave these questions for upcoming chapters.
And at the end where is your note girl??? Don't skip them. It feels to have little conversation with you while reading few lines as your note.
Love you for your work. Keep writing and keep making us crazy for your work.😉
Morning Edit: Just read the update again and I noticed a similarity, Khalid bhai was a shooting champion and Arnav is also a good shooter so is that just a coincident or a hint 😉 am sure it's not a coincident but I really hope that's the only thing he has got from his father, his destiny should not be like his father...
One more thing isn't there any physical similarity between the father and the son??? Like similar nose or hair or facial features??? (Not mentioning eyes as I want him to have his mother's eyes and maybe that's why Khalid bhai has a certain pull towards Arnav...)And didn't anyone notice that similarity??? Maybe Abass did notice and he dug Arnav's past and knew the truth and maybe that's why he is after him... and what if it's Abass who wants a downfall of Khalid bhai and maybe he is the one using that Das guy for this... I guess for Abass it's not about money it's always about power...
where the hell has Aman lost??? isn't he worried about his family anymore???
Edited by lilly205 - 13 years ago
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