Arhi FF: Kalarikkal House (Thread 2 link posted)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Homicidal she-devil, seriously, you've a terrific sense of humor :P

But the kiss had me cringing I think. I know kiss and make the girl shut up is very sexy and everything. But K cried at the end. Destroyed the whole effect.

Loving the story and looking forward as to how you are going to take it forward :D

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: mistyrains
Homicidal she-devil, seriously, you've a terrific sense of humor :P

But the kiss had me cringing I think. I know kiss and make the girl shut up is very sexy and everything. But K cried at the end. Destroyed the whole effect.

Loving the story and looking forward as to how you are going to take it forward :D

Hehe.. Thanks.

As for the kiss, his little monologue to that end proved that it had no romantic intention at all; while it looks sexy to us watching while couples do this on-screen, I think when it occurs in situations like this, it's just a weapon rather than anything else. She used hers, so he used what he thought would work on her.

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varshapan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#313

i am just so happy that you updated... have begun looking forward to this as much as to lavender.

arnav is an a*hole every time.. isn't he? i mean what better way to shut up a woman he can't win against fairly... hmm... but i like his line about the home.

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inspiringstars

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Posted: 13 years ago

#314

Wow, the first kiss.,...did i get it right, it was his first kiss as well? anyways beautiful scene...both frozen after the kiss...and she did not know about the money

I am sad she lost her brother...thats why they are in debt...

finally the ice is broken between them I guess..

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: inspiringstars
Wow, the first kiss.,...did i get it right, it was his first kiss as well? anyways beautiful scene...both frozen after the kiss...and she did not know about the money
I am sad she lost her brother...thats why they are in debt...
finally the ice is broken between them I guess..

No, not his first kiss. He meant that it was the first time that he had kissed a woman in such circumstances without any romantic intentions.

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inspiringstars

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: -publicenemy-

No, not his first kiss. He meant that it was the first time that he had kissed a woman in such circumstances without any romantic intentions.

Oh well, anyways these both characters are like fire...so I see explosions in the vicinity...LOL

You girl have amazing sense of humor...and amazing writing skills!

Loved it

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mak3mesmile

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Can I still call her Khushi?

I don't quite agree with Raizada on his statement about house becoming a burden and all but I guess that depends on experience as I think Khushi doesn't agree either. I wonder if we're going to get the lowdown of Khushi's mind after the kiss which was very rude of ASR but not likely unexpected.

Again wonderfully written!!

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Kishmish

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Fabulous update ...

it's really sad as at times just being a girl makes you a liability instead of an asset ... Arnav was really hurtful when he said the following words ... but the words found their mark ...

" Having met his children, I can only surmise that you're not in the asset, but the liability column. Whatever redeeming qualities your sister has has been lost by slaving away in this house. If you are both so f**king educated, why don't you actually work for a living instead of living in this historical artifact and indulging your father's decidedly foolish whims at every turn?" ...

Love Kashi's spitfire nature ... but this visit of Arnav will be a real eye opener for both the girls regarding their financial situation and their future ...

Edited by Kishmish - 13 years ago