AR Smoke n Sizzle #1 ( NOTE pg 3 ) - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
hey dear.
good start..
billy seems interesting..
and armaan's views about relationships was...
well.. do continue soon
and pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 1

"hey sexy..! Wanna dance some more. U've got the hots around here."
A guy screamed into her ears smelling of alcohol and arrogance.
"I know m sexy. But I don't want to dance with YOU, so buzz off you jerk." she almost spat.
"ooh.. Feisty huh..you're irresistible, come here." the jerk gripped her hand roughly leading her towards the bar.

She knocked him right in the eye and spewed,"don't you dare!"
But the guy wasn't one to give up.
Clutching her hair he tried dragging her but he couldn't have imagined in his scariest nightmare what fate had in store for him.
The moment he touched her again...
*Slap.. Punch.. Smack...
Thud*
The guy lay flat on the ground visibly knocked out by the venomous beauty.

Maggie went her own way huffing in anger and sheer frustration.
But it wasn't just this one jerk who had his eyes on her. Almost all had eyed her while she danced. Amongst all, there was armaan too.

He alongwith muskaan, Anjali and atul had decided to check out this club, most happening one currently. And anybody could guess why it was so ?
'Smoke n sizzle' had that sense of life in it, not to mention the roaring fire.

But armaan had been most fascinated by this particular beauty. She seemed to be the source of life in this place and her strength brewed up a proud emotion in his heart. Women he thought had to get self dependent to pull through such issues.
Looking sideways, he noted that his buddies too were blatantly staring at her. Though he conveniently forgot that he too had been doing the same.
"atul you seem interested, so is anjie in for some competition, huh ?"
Flustered as he usually seemed, atul replied, "anjie's on a different level altogether." ending with a dreamy smile. Trademark atul.
Anjali blushed while muski and armaan whistled.

"come on guys let's burn the dance floor. Don't. Bore. me." came muski's plead cum threat.
Just as they danced away, joking and chatting now and then, maggie passed the gang.

Feeling her hand being caught by someone, she prepared herself for yet another duel. But got surprised as soon as she turned.
Anjali had spotted the girl and being the proud woman she was, held on to Maggie.
"good show!! Your dance is awesome.and so are your guts." anjie winked at her. Smiling at the double meaning compliment, she gratefully replied, "thanks. For d compliment on my dance and my guts." she winked too.

Laughing, anjie urged her to dance with them.
"I would love to. But have to meet up a friend. Some other time." smiling she turned away towards the bar.
She had to wile away her time till that bloody DJ took a break.




Well, 12th taking it's toll. Hardly get time to pen down the ff. But havent created it just to abandon it.. So here's a small installment ... Will continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
Aquanymph ... Heyy.. Thnxx for ur comments. They are really precious to me. Do keep commenting. And yeah can u add me to ur Buddy list fr d pm.. It's much easier that way. 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
Mohit aggarwal : Thank u...
It really is motivating to have more readers.. That too for beginners like me...
Do keep commenting..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
hey vini..
nice update...i loved d way u have portrayed maggi...
n d instance where she knocks dat guy down is the best in d update...😉
Armaan noticing...maggi..aha...interesting...! Where are u taking the story..?
Update soonnn...super soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
very interesting!
would love 2 read further! do pm me when u update nd cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
hey plz pm me wenever u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
NOTE
Heyy guys...
Well m seeming too lazy just at d start of my ff... Bt well 12th taking it's toll... N I can't help it...

I thank every1 commenting and reviewing my updates... N i feel as if on the moon when i see readers multiplying n at d same time feel like shit not being able to update...
No time for separate replies to the comments... No time to update...
But yeah... I ve written quite a bit...( Not as much as I would have liked to)
So I ll b continuing soon...

All this babble just to say m overwhelmed by the response even if comments r just starting to flow... And the update will b coming at September end or maybe 1st week of October... I promise...!!

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