**RaghaVi FF: The Seasons Of Life** - Page 30

Originally posted by: sam123_0

Hayyee... that is one beautiful update!

Love the relation of Sia-Krish and Raghav-Krish... Though both Raghav-Sia do share a relation... they still dont know it ... All thanks to Mr Attitude😆

I really neeed to know the driver of that car which took away Raghav's angel😛 Some insight into Sia's life as well please... pretty please😆😆😆

Eagerly waiting for the next update! You better not take such a long break

Next update aayega... but sorry yaar... gotta wait ... HC's new avatar has compelled me to write something up... a new OS with many parts...can it even be called an OS i doubt... but paper si nikal kar lappy mein dalne ka waqt nahi

Originally posted by: tweetie19

Sneha dii...🤗

What a lovely update... Finally RaghaVi's misunderstandings are sorted out and they are getting to know each other better ☺️

Loved the icecream date 😳 Sia eating so many ice creams was 🤣 As u mentioned, even i remembered the Chocolate dad of Ideal ice creams...its my fav

Eagerly waiting for the next part di

Originally posted by: lakshmi_3004

di show mein tho Sia bohot der karti thi na...yehaan bhi agar sab slow chali tho kaise cahlega?? *goes in corner hands folded and pouts sulking*😆

Originally posted by: Lizakhan

Welcome back di 🤗

Firstly thank you for the pm 😛

And the update needless to say is awesome👏

You are a really really good writer and I mean it...

Originally posted by: komal jagdesh

Welcome back merey Eid ka chand🤗

Your chapter is always dhasu di

love the way you write😊

and yeah...

Thanx for pm

Originally posted by: AJlovesArshi

Awesome update dear.. :)

Loved it... :)

Originally posted by: KS_Shreya

Kisi aur se kaho VM banane ke liye...waise woh toh ek gana bhi nahi hai. 😆

Kya khilaon?

Originally posted by: The_Inner_Voice

Eid ka chand... 😆... dekha eidd ka chand tere liye eidi lekar aayi thi 😉

Dhansu 😆... tu na komal 🤗

Originally posted by: jerrenkarthi

How can you send pm like this infact you are not disturbing me you are my friend how can a friend disturb another friend.Infact i want you to disturb me with this lovely writing of yours so dont forget to disturb me.
Please distueb me like this of new new writing of yours. Dont forget to send a pm for next chapter.

Originally posted by: flutterby

read all the chapters now.. 😈 now here r some more of my emoticons for u..

i loved this relation between siya, krish and raghav... lovely detailing, beautiful descriptions... and all those phrases u use.. like a hug to say all is right and kisses to say u r mine.. are just ☺️

Originally posted by: premeeristry

Ahh!!u made my weekend sneha...just loved the whole journey of 4 chapters..but am not done yet...i want to know wads next 😔
but i tell u i enjoyed reading it...😊
so here's my take on your ff

Saba 🤗... you made my day with those words there and the awesome summing up of your thoughts 😃... n about knowing the next... well gotta wait sweets 😉


prologue:..the description of each season was very beautifully done 👍🏼
thankooos 😉


character sketch:..i was amazed to see hariprasad's name here 😆 coz never before i had seen any of servents name in CS...but
the later chapters explains it well why it was included..

Filhaal to he's the only one at the singh mansion other than KriGhav.. so couldnt miss out on him... n glad that u decipered why he was integral 😃



ch.1-p(a):i just liked the way you started...evry time the stories starting on confusing and mysterious note grabs ones attention ...they keep u curious to know wads next..
the family time was amazing..splly Dev becoming bali ka bakra .. 😆 i wonder y we din't get such single scene 😡...it was nicely taken to hospital...but Raghav-komal convo had it 😒 that was upsetting @same tym intensely beautiful ..end was superb 😭...

Glad that it set the tempo right ... I for one wished they would hav shown the family times in the show too... so kinda filling in the gaps in my FF 😉... Abt Raghav Komal convo... well that was kinda tough to pull ...but if u go 😭 a that i guess i did something right there.



ch.1-p(b):am sure this bumping gurl is Siya..🤔
"Chachu maine bye boldiya, happy journey aur safe journey bhi bol diya aur to aur yeh bhi kaha ki aaj to wohi jeetenge..."
this was heart wrenching 🥺
Sabko bumping girl ki padi hai 😆...
N Krish always has this thing abt him that makes us go 🥺 so many times in show...kinda trying to keep it intact 😊



ch.1-p(c) :i found Raghav suspective.🤔...protective as well.
Hmmm... good observation I say... 😉



ch.1-p(d):Siya-krish has a cute bond 😊..why is Siya's identity hidden till now 🤔..?
Siya Krish always were like 😊 calming effect trying to carry the same image here...I know ke sabko Siya ki identity jaanani hai... well let the story unravel at its pace for now.


ch.2-p(a):Am doubting Siya now 😕she's impressing evry1 watchmen, servent..leaving Raghav 😆..Siya's morning poem is so buttery mei bhi phisal jati agar mujhe kaha tou ...😆
Haaan ab aya naa doubt ka keeda... mugambo khush hua... 😆
Le maska tujhe bhi lag gaya 😆
"We are going for a bath not a war champ so cheer up."😆
😆


ch.2-p(b):wads wrong with Raghav why rude with Siya?he's acting widout knowng whole story..Siya is going too far in impressing han.😲.juggling??😆 this reena chahi was some irritating thng...wad does Raghav's chahu want him to think again ?
Things look like loose ends now...As the story takes shape u'll see why those characters are the way they are 😉


ch.3-p(a): Siya is tit for tat to Raghav ...but he needed this heart to heart talk with her..
Hmmm... tu ser to main sava ser... 😆... that talk was much needed one.. yup I agree 😊

ch.3-p(b):"Pinky promise???" why don't we have it in much more manly way...as a man to man deal? What say champ?"
was this a retort to Siya's pinky promise 😆
karele ki subzi scene was wonderful...who mysterious person picks Siya?? wow Siya bettng workers nice..😆
Well that surely was a retort yaar... 😆
Siya ka pehla khana n that too karele ki sabzi... no sweets... only bittergourd 😆
And tu bhi Saba us driver ke piche padi hai... yaar ye driver bahut footage kha raha hai aajkal saare comments mein 😆


ch.4-p(a):this wishing bowl thing is innovative n cute...Raghav was called kaka 🤣
Thankuuu...n dont worry he'll be called many more names...just wait n watch 😆


ch.4-p(b):RaghavI had to fyt...
thats a cardinal rule now 😆

"She isn't screaming at' She is screaming into the pillow Chachu." 🤣
Glad it made u go 🤣

"Champ! When did you say that she wouldn't accompany us? "When you were looking at Maasi as she walked out the gates with other didis there." he was badly caught here 🤣
Chor ki daadi mein tinka 😆

"Why am I being left out of this conversation?" 😆 sweet lil krish
😉
"Scratch that off!!! she is really on bad terms 😆
😆
oye even i luv butter scotch 😊
Me tooo 🤗

"Raghav was staring at her open mouthed after listening her order."why was he open mouthed"..i dint get his reaction here??🤔
The way she was ordering one after the other ...looking at her petite figure he wondered where all the food would go 😆

"What? I eat more when I'm upset' Don't stare at me like that"
dont tell me Siya has a kungfu panda ki atmah 🤣
U mean PO... 😆... yaar i love that character 😆... i dont mind if she resembles him 😆

Siya seems to hav mysterious past 🤔
Hmmm...no comments 😆

"childhood starts with a capital C and it stands for Chocolate." okey i was unaware of this abbreviation 😆
That was made up ...something I came up with in the writing flow... dont worry food does that to me 😆

the end of trip was as sweet as kriGhav's n Sia's ice- cream...😊
its again Siya telling sorry but not him 😆 ..
i want all my answers 😳...waiting to know wads next...do pm me.
Glad u liked the way the chapter ended... 😆
Oye u giving me a 😳 look...guess the answers suffice your quests 😆

N abt the next Pm ...wil be sending when i'm done wid the chapter 😉... pinky promise 😆


love
saba

Love u too Saba 🤗