FF: Indecent Proposal #2 [Thread 3 - Page 158] - Page 81

Hmm so asr knows about shyam wonder y he is keeping mum for his di mb
Love the update poor khushi

pls continue soon

i think that the original would have known about it and would have made a sticky situation from which Shyam wouldn't have been able to escape even if he wanted to. Hmmm... you've upped the stakes! Ohhh!!! I can't wait for the next chapter and you know what I'm talking about!!!

So nani is proving to be Arnav's nani..lol. Bet arnav thought this through wonder how he will circumvent this one lol.

asr's mother is smart.now what will khushi do

I to was surprised that in the show Shyam was able to fool everyone so easily... it didn't ring true for me that ASR wouldn't have investigated Shyam background or character before he was allowed to marry Anjali... or is it only women are who are gold diggers in his mind????

As is so much stronger in this.
Khushi that much more in a worse state.
Shyam that much disgusting.
Lavanya that much more b****y.
And nani that much more smart.
Things are spicing up.
But seriously I think that khushi has suffered so much. Hope she does not suffer more. Hope nani understands the poor girls position.

Oooh!
Arnav and Khushi are in trouble...!
Seriously though, awesome update. Didn't even expect it soo soon as well!
I like how you've done the thing with Arnav not trusting Shyam. Even I thought that the Arnav in the show was a bit clueless, considering the fact that he was supposed to be brilliant at everything. I'm glad I'm not the only one!
I feel really bad for Khushi, and I seriously just feel like smacking Arnav across the face and telling him everything he needs to no, that bhoodoo. But unfortunately this your fiction. So I'm expecting you to do something bout it!
And why do I have a feeling that Lavanya I'd going to conviently meet up with the reason that she has no boyfriend. I'm really looking forward to that actually !
Once again awesome update, and I'm still itching to read more !
Thanks for the PM as well !
Celiza xox

so true yukhs...its hard 2 believe dat a person lyk the ASR was deceived by his own bro in law who happens 2b a dumb ass lol da folpped plans he made 2 kill anjali wich always backfired.hahaha