FF: Indecent Proposal #2 [Thread 3 - Page 158]

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priya_raother

@priya_raother

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Posted: 13 years ago

#821

Awesome update... thanks for the PM

And desperately waiting for the next update

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 13 years ago

#822

nice update.. liked it that ASR knew abt Shyam.. and Nani is too much.. waiting to see how ASR handles this..

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prerna salian

@prerna31s

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Posted: 13 years ago

#823

Liked hw u let arnav knw hw shyam is :)
Well nw dey r in trouble !! Divyani is a very good observer ! ;-)

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Sona

@mistyrains

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Posted: 13 years ago

#824

I love the fact that Arnav is cautious of Shyam, a welcome change.

But Arnav's behavior towards Khushi is what I don't understand. Clearly he is far more than only effected by her, but his actions speak other wise. But I am waiting for what you have in store for us.

Brilliant chapter as always:)

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shagun-rocks

@shagun-rocks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#825

what??..you updated!!...*doing a happy dance *...okay now coming back to the FF, this was another fabulous chapter...👏...the inner thoughts of the various characters came to the fore...lavanya, nani, khushi, & arnav's perspectives were portrayed beautifully...i am so glad to know that arnav is already aware of the misdeamenours of his jijaji...👍🏼...so if, at all the latter tries to set his eyes on khushi, arnav would know who is at fault...nani & lavanya, albeit in their own ways might find out the truth regarding khushi's actual status...🤔...gosh, my heart goes out for this poor girl...😭...you know you are one heck of a writer...& you continue to prove the same with every chapters that you update...honey, please, pretty please update the next chapter ASAP...would be eagerly looking forward to it...& thanks a ton for the pm...😃...hugs & kisses...🤗

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Ridhi

@ridizzz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#826

awesome update

liked it

i feel for khushi...poor girl...she can't even say anything to anyone...I like ASR in this...he know everything around him...

plz cont. soon

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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#827

Wow that was an amazing update! :)

Yeah ASR here is damn smart than the one in the show! :) Glad in that way. Does it mean shyam will turn out to be a creep again? Hope not! 😡

I really feel sad for khushi. The longing in her shows how sad she is now with her life.

And arnav! He is smart but not smart enough! After observing khushi watching Shyam-Anajli scene longingly he concluded that she was seeing shyam? really? He dint even have a slightest thought that she might want a life like that with HIM? 🤢

Awesome update!: )

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564436

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Posted: 13 years ago

#828

I would be putting his clothes away in our closet when he would sneak up on me by holding me from behind. I would get upset at him for scaring me and he would kiss and kiss my neck until I forgave him. <---- you read my thoughts lol good update thanks for the PM :)

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#829

Hey there...an amazing update u gave us...even i ws surprised wid wat cv made up of arnav's character...i mean FGS dt persn ws cheatd by hs own chacha n mreovr he let hs sis marry a persn widout properly chking the BG of dt prsn...wel cuming bak 2 update i really felt 4 khushi...she hd drmz of nrml gal bt dnt ve nrml lyf no mre...n realy devyani's character z amazingly written...wat a nani shud actualy do...n la z realy going 2 b a catalyst in arnv's n khushi's lv stry...i js hpe shyam dnt create any prob btwn dem...btw thnx 4 pm:-)

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

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Posted: 13 years ago

#830

That was damn good.

Arnav notices the little changes in Khushi but he just doesn't understand the feelings behind it while Khushi is pining for a proper, secure life and relationship.

Uh oh Nani wants to speak to Khushi's parents?! Wonder what Arnav and Khushi are going to do now?

Continue soon (: