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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update👏
loved ittt😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanxx sweetu😉😉 4 such a nyc update
loved it
do update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awseome update yar...
the arrangements for date were beautiful..
loved it...
especially rey's pov it was superb...
thnx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing updates
thanks for pm
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
@sweety-reylover: Awesum n fantastic thread!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
i donno meri demand itni badi thi ke u cannot fulfil...ke itni choti u did not wanna fulfil...anyways m here with the update...but demand complet nahi ki isliye lenght choti 😛

Episode 33

before u start with the update leemme tell u...please read it under the guidance..:P

recape: at the right time …in the right environment….with the right gesture rey proposed kreya

----rey's pov----

I didn't know what to say! How to say! How to say the three words….the words which would have changed my life….her fleaks where still there….they were blocking her view…but she did nothing…just stood there…..her eyes were on me….i wasn't looking at her…but I could feel it…her small eyes had turn into big ones maybe coz she was angry …or surprised…

The music stops

Ahhh!! The cd ended…I wanted someone to come and press the replay button…but I knew no one would come…anyways I had to faceit…I could hear all her quetons…which her eyes spoke…I was busy thinking…thinking about how would I face her? What will be my ans…how will I see her eyes…how will I face her?

My thinking was disturbed…by her…her eyes moved away…she was now looking at the picture behind me! Why hell on earth would she do that? Why did she take her eyes off me? Was she uncomfortable? Did she want me to speak first? Give her an explanation for this? Tell her my feeling!

Oh shit! She isz looking at me again…but wait the vibs she is giving me are not the same…her lips are also moving…is she smiling? Laughing at the decoration? Is it too much? Or she isz making fun out of me?

Yes! Were the words which disturbed me again…

---rey's pov ends----

K: yes!

----rey's pov----

I took my eyes of the ground…her fleaks were still there…but they were no more blocking her view….her lips were smiling…not me…they were actually happy…I was happy that there was no more music….because the music her heart made was much soothing….i wanted to record them…and did…it…I on the voice recorded…and I knew she wants to hear from me…and so I did

----pov ends----

R: i…i…

K: love you?

R: love you! My baatcutter

K: me too line cutter…

The music starts!

----rey's pov---

God dammit! What the hell! But the it is an awesome song!

----rey' pov ends----

Yun tera muskurana, aur aake chale jaana
Yun tera muskurana aur aake chale jaana
Kismat ka hai khul jaana

Tera, deedar hua

I got up…I saw her watching all my moves…she was as still as lake water…her beauty…was making me crazy…


Pehla, sa pyaar hua
Pehli hi baar hua iss dil ko

By now I was on legs…the land under was still shaking I could not believe she said yes…she accepted my proposal…


Naa toh, inkaar hua
Naa hi, iqraar hua
Jaane kya yaar hua iss dil ko
Yun tera muskurana aur aake chale jaana

I took the ring out of the box…she gave a glance at the ring..and then her smile grew bigger…must say ladies and diamonds…uff!!

Kismat ka hai khul jaana
Tera, deedar hua
Pehla, sa pyaar hua
Pehli hi baar hua iss dil ko
Naa toh, inkaar hua
Naa hi, iqraar hua
Jaane kya yaar hua iss dil ko

all this while she was glancing at the ring and I was staring, I ordered my eyes to look away..but they never hear my commands…and for the first time I like them for not following….me!


Tujhse mila toh jaagi duaayein
Aur nazar ne sajda kiya

She was still looking…maybe it was the dimond who affected her…I felt as if she was waiting…but waiting for what ? for me too speak? Again a glance on me and then on the ring…what it was?


Jannat zameen pe aayi utar ke
Khushiyon ne jaise chun sa liya

Ohh…f*ck ! dude! I m an ass! She was waiting for me to give her the ring…place the ring where it belonged…I went on my keens again…and gave her eyes a look…and there her eyes were already staring me…I told them…"ilove you" they were stunned dont know why but they were….i picked up the ring and now the ring was between us!


O tujhse mila toh jaagi duaayein
Aur nazar ne sajda kiya
Jannat zameen pe aayi utar ke
Khushiyon ne jaise chun sa liya
Har manzar dilnasheen hai aha

Finally I gathered all my courage...and took her hand in mine…her hands were so soft…I felt she was sweating….but why? Why was she nervous? Maybe because she was talking a big decision of her life?

Maybe she had second thoughts? If she had second thought she would have never said yes!

Maybe she was afraid …that how will she tell this to swayum….


Tu hi tu har kahin hai aha
Oh teri yeh rajaayein toh hai saari qatilana
Tera, deedar hua
Pehla, sa pyaar hua
Pehli hi baar hua iss dil ko
Naa toh, inkaar hua
Naa hi, iqraar hua
Jaane kya yaar hua iss dil ko

and there was the ring….in its right place…the third finger of kreya's….my kreya's left hand….the nerves which directly connected to her heart?!

But I donno if this saying is true…I hope it is….

I got up…I was looking into her beautiful eyes…and there came another song

Kehte hain:
Khuda ne iss jahaan mein
Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya
Har kisi ke liye
Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara
Maano mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye

Her hand were still in mine….i went four steps back and she got it…..and the other second we started our dance….first close dance ever….she came to me…and now she was in front of me…and her hair were all around my face….on the slow music we moved slowly

Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kaise hum jaane, hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta

I hold her from her waist…and picked her up….she opened her arms and I turned her around…i had did this
step with Sharon before…but what I was feeling now…I never felt then

Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fikar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yehi marna issi ke liye

I kept her down….she faced me….she put her arms around me…I was still holding her..protectively…as if some one was gona steal her…from me..


Kehte hain:
Khuda ne iss jahaan mein
Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya
Har kisi ke liye

we were moving slowly…I pulled her towards me…she was this close to me that I could feel her breath…it was like the breath she exhaled , I inhaled ….i was goning crazy…and I think so was she…I went close to her face…she did not move…she still…and I kissed her cheeks…

Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fiqar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yehi marna issi ke liye

The cheeks turned red…she somehow got away from me…she ran towards our pic…I was blushing too.. I truned to see her …she was in a back less choli…her hair coverd them…


Kehte hain:
Khuda ne iss jahaan mein
Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya
Har kisi ke liye

I was still staring at her back…I took steps towards her…



Heart beats fastColors and promises

How to be brave

How can I love when I'm afraidTo fall

But watching you stand alone

All of my doubtSuddenly goes away somehow
One step closer

Soon I was rite behind her…I took her hair…and placed them aside…she turned her head to left….she was starring at our pic…I kissed her back….it made her blushed soo much

I have died everyday waiting for you

Darlin' don't be afraid I have loved you for aThousand yearsI

'll love you for aThousand more

I took her face in my hand…and turned her…she turned so gracefully…she was not seeing me…I picked her face again…and now I could see her beautiful face….she was so beautiful….and sexy…and tempting too!

Every breath,Every hour has come to this
One step closer
I have died everyday


I have died everyday Waiting for youDarlin' don't be afraid

,I have loved you for aThousand years

I'll love you for aThousand more

We were still starring each other….we were so close that the air she exhaled.., I inhaled…I went more closer….i took her face between my arms…and went forward to kiss…she closed her eyes ….in uncomfort…I dropped her face and turned my back towards her!

Precape : is rey angry?


*phew*


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Urs shivani..aka shivi,sweetu,shivu,nivya,kiko


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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww rey loves kria so much...
mast tha...
Hmmm 50 pages...kuch karna padega..
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Posted: 12 years ago




nope 😛

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