D3 my style thread two! - Page 17

Originally posted by: cookie_arsha

haawww..😲

haila kissine dekh liya na den u will get nyc pastries...

acha u gt any1 in coll 😛

Originally posted by: cookie_arsha

hws my dp..??

Originally posted by: sweety-reylover

i dont like ridhima...

ekk kam kar arman ka pic dal 😉

Originally posted by: cookie_arsha

NOOO

i like riddhima nly

nd gud news m a rockerz nw

Ae tu bau slow ati toh hun su karu

Originally posted by: cookie_arsha

Ae tu bau slow ati toh hun su karu

i finishd my target :p

Episode 32

Note : before we start'on demand ofMadhukumari (sorry dear I forgot ur name) its gona b long update'.itna lamba ke u'll get tired of reading':P as on her demand again'its gona be a update on KR'and before u start with the update leemme tell u..its a update..please read it under the guidance..:P lolzzz'

Okay bak bak band sedha update'hope u enjoy'.and aroma di I have kept ur words in mind when I was writing this!

One more thing I neva thanks the reader of this ff'I have completed 31 episodes only because of u ol! Thanx for encourageing me with ur comments n hitting d LIKE tab'I love ol d readers of my ff'n I hope u enjoy my writing'

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Okay so finally the update is here'

After haldi'

R: guyz'I beg'plz temme

A: kya ? aisa kya janna hai tere ko'

V: haan haan bol na'

R: kuch nahi'.

Amar: toh beg kyu kar raha hai'

N: hum ko pata chal gaya!

R: raghav?

Ra: rey!

---Rey's pov---

Wat the'f**k dude! Yeh swayum aur raghav ko maine chodunga nahi'in logo ko kyu bataya?!

U r dead raghav!

Usse bolne ki 'kya zarurt thi, but ekk second'pyaar hi kiya koi chori thodi ki hai?

Darr ta hun kya? Kya kar kya lege? Bhut kuch kar sakte hai'shyaad'.aarree aane de'pyaar kiya toh daar na kya? Kreya ko pata chala toh? Oh man'maine pyaar kyu kiya? But pyaar toh hona hi tha!

Maine toh kreya ka dewaana hun! But pyaar koi khel toh nahi'..

Maine kya bol raha hun'dude ! shit, m thinking'

Aaj pata chala pyaar kitna ajeeb hota hai'.ajab rey ki gazab kahani!! Maine pagal ho gayi hun'ishq maine!

M kab se itna filmy ho gaya?

Kya kar rahi hai yeh miss battcutter?!!?!!?!!

Batt cutter'.propose!

----pov ends----

R: tune bol diya'ke maine kreya ko like karta hun!

V: what dude!?

B: aaila!

A: wow!

Amar: sahi hai boss!

Nil : tu n kreya?

R: tum logo isski baat kar rahe the na?!

A: nahi hum toh pakka rehe the'tune khud h bol diya! :P

R: shit!

Ra: swayum 'abhi abhi jo rey ne kiya usse kya kehte hai?

Sw: khud ke paaro pe kulhadi marna! :P

R: m gona kill u!

Raghav starts running'aage aage raghav piche piche rey'baagte baagte rey ke haat maine job hi aaya sab raghav ko mara but boxer raghav har jizo se bcah gaya'.akhir raghav aur rey ono thak gaye'.

Ra: hhhuhhh'bas'bas'

R: haan maine bhi thak gaya'

R: plan toh bol'

Ra: bhul jaa'starts running again'rey follows him'and this time rey catches him'

R: bol nahi toh'

Ra: achha achha '.kaan de'

R: wat?

Ra: aarree tune suna nahi hai dewwaro ke bhi kaan hote hai'

R: ohh

Raghav rey ke kaan maine bolna chalu karta hai 'aur rey ke chehre ki smile badti hi jati hai'the boyz also know the plan'.they too were happy for rey'..

-----Swayums pov----

My sista isz soo lucky usse rey jaisa pyaar karne wala ladka mila'.i am sooo happy for her'bas I hope ke who bhi aaj rey ko haan bol de'. N yeh sif uske universe ji ke haatho maine hai'.please aapna magic chaloo'.coz I rey isz the best person for my sister'.

----pov ends---

-----Rey's pov-------

Raghav ne plan toh bol diya but 'agar kreya ne mera proposal refuse kiya toh? Kyun karegi?

Shayad who kisi aur ko like? chodunga nahi! But I can't hurt her that way! Toh '.huh'lets not think '..sif aaj raat ke liye wait karte hai'

---pov ends---

At night 8'o clock'there was a room on the end of terrace'.it was a place no one come'raghav meant to give total privacy to them'the entrance of room was same'.once u enter the room'the was a path'covered with the petal of red rose'the path ended to a small table and two chairs'on the table was that ring which rey was going to give to kreya'there was a small music player at the end of the room..The cd had all romantic songs'one would have ever heard'the ground was coverd with heart shape red and white color balloons'...the air freshener was of rose flavor too' there was a big pic of rey and kreya'on the wall'.in short it was rosy rosy everywhere'rey was alredy in the room...the background music was pelha nasha pelha khumar '.

Rey moves towards that pic'places his hand on kreya..and with all his love moves his finger down'till her chin..(kuch kuch hota hai scene)

----reys pov----

She isz soo beautiful'I 'I 'I love her'.i am unconditional in love with her'..if she refues my proposal today I would die'and to live with it'would be like dying each day'the pain I'll feel when she will refuse my proposal'would be the pain'I don't wanna think for, but if she says yes'

a big smile comes on his face

(pov continues)

I want to be her first love..i wanna die in her arms'I know I am thinking a bit too much'but I just cant stop thinking'thinking about her'if I would have her in my life'then I don't need anything else'just her love will make complete'.her eyes will show all what I wanna see'her lips will tell me all what I wanna hear 'she will be the reson of my living'

Kreya puts her step on the terrace '

(pov continues)

Aa gayi woh'god!! I could feel her'isz this what people say love!? Haan yaar'.jab Sharon aati hai toh swayum ko bhi pata chalta hai no'

Aa gayi woh!!

----pov ends---

And suddenly the door opens'Lights fades off'kreya enters'she could see nothing'but she could feel love everywhere, spot light fades in'the light was soo harsh that she turned her eyes to the other corner but it was too dark there to see her'

As the light falls on her 'rey sees her'

---rey's pov-----

Shit '..she isz awesome'her fleaks which are over her face makes her kind of more beautiful'I want ke it should be me'everytime'to put her fleaks back into her place'I feel like the land bellow me isz disapperead'.and m falling'falling and falling..there is no end'I donno where this will take me'I donno if this will hurt me'I donno anything, all I know is she has to be mine'n I wanna be hers forever'

Koi hai..?

---pov ends---

K: koi hai? Hello?

---rey's pov---

I wanted to speak but I wasn't able to her sweet voice made me feel dizzy'

---pov ends---

the light fades in'and kreya saw it all'the roses which her feet were crushing'the table' a box on it'the ballons'the music player which was now playing what makes u beautiful'by one direction'the pic..and she got it'it is rey'.but where on the earth he was'and suddenly as an angel'

---rey's pov---

She saw me coming'I soo wished I could be Edward, I wanted to know what she was thinking..abut the settings, about me! What is going on her mind'?? But if she isz bella of her life'and if I am Edward'technically I should not be able to hear her thoughts'I hope I am her Edward and not jake!

---pov ends---

Rey walked toward the table'took the box and the towards his love,kreya 'went on his keen'opened the box'

Precape : KR scenes!!

Okay *phew* I think this isz the longest update I have were written'I took me 2 days to type'.i hope meri mehant safal ho'

@ Madhukumari : I hope u like the length'and hope u enjoyed kr rather rey scenes'

@aroma di: I hope u liked the length too'and I hope I expreesed my feeling better

@ lovely7010: the way u write'awesome'ur writing is the inspiration'

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Amazing update
loved it
beautiful..
the way rey's feeling were described..hayeyyeee..<3
itni jaldi stop kyu kiya...update soon
awww thnxx sooo much...

Hii shivani,
m one and only Madhu. .
OMG. . . . .
It was totaly awsome loved. . . . . . .
Yayyy m happy with the length and our kriyaansh part. . .
Raghav and rey ki runing game was sweet.
Haiyye starting mai rey ka confusion on pyaar,
it was super cute,sach mai pyaar ko rey ne sach mai filmy bana diya h.hehehe:-D. . .
Woww kriyaansh ka woh date wala part so so so so so romantic. . . . .
Haiyye mai toh mar jaawa. . . . .
Nw lets see kriya ka kya jawaab hoga*waise i knw kya jawaab hoga*
nxt part jaldi update krna,
i realy i cnt wait 4 it. . .
Update soon. .:-)
and yes me second. . . .

awesome update
rey nd raghav chase was hillarious
the arragement for there proposal was awesome
rey ban gaya filmy yar isiko pyar kahate hai
swayam concern for her sister was nice