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Posted: 13 years ago
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To all my sweetheart readers...i love you all so much that it would take me whole forum to explain...😊...


I tried to write this short story...as i always say you all are most welcome to throw rotten tomatoes and eggs at me...but if by chance you like the story please do not hesitate to flick a comment... 😉


lov you all...🤗


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THE HIDDEN PAIN A Short Story...

(RTMC FF)



Part 1


Every morning she was seen jogging on the busy streets of Delhi...as usual she looked mesmerizing with the morning sun...strong and bold, committed towards her work...her only passion was her job...



She entered a big bungalow on a silent street...her Mother died few years back...she lived with her Father, a retired army officer who previously wasn't happy with his daughter working outside but today he is a proud Father and supports her in every way...


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"Dad...i am getting late...i have an important meeting...will catch you in the evening..." she quickly kept her bag in the car...and drove towards the busy roads... soon she reached a building in a central city...


she wasn't late for the meeting...she wanted to be part of this enormous project...she was always waiting for this opportunity...



As she entered the main door she saw her senior Mr Shiv Kumar, a middle age man who always appreciated her work "morning Sir..."



Shiv nodded and both went towards the meeting...





"As we all know this is important case discussion...and everyone needs results...we have to face media...and now we have to really work hard...it is shocking for us to hear what's happening every day... I think we have to hand over this case to CBI"


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After some time


Mr Desai gave the files to Shiv... "these are all the files related to the case"


Shiv happily greeted him "i am not handling this case..."


Mr Desai looked confused.. "Then??"


Shiv saw her while she came out from the meeting '.. "Sir...you called me..."


"Yes '.this is Mr Desai, inspector Delhi police who was handling this case before and..."

Shiv was about to complete when she took the files and shook hands with Mr Desai "Priya Khanna, CBI Officer..."



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moonlight2630 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice plZ counti...
Thanks 4 pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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resi jii
wil edit soon, widin five hrs...
~~EDITED~~

o no di, evn i m gonna write something like dis, i mean sm thing..
of course not exact...but ma mugdha is cbi officer ofcourse like urs and rt is a gangster... cool n happing jodi na...

so i feel, evn dis stry has rt as a criminal or similar like dat.
so dnt wry abt dat vry much..
but u noe, i still lov ur writing...

really luking forward for it..
plz ud soon,
u noe na, i love thrillers n
i lov ur wrtitng..
so on whole..

i sooper double lov dis stry ,

priya khanna.. yes i noe, priya once told u to write a stry wid her name as mugdha...
vry sweet of u di..
u care for every one so much..


dats d reason i lov u, n all oder di's too...

u n oder di's hav made dis wonderful site really interesting for me..😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh ho...that seems interesting...👏
so our mug's is a cbi officer...supper great...
waiting for our hero...are kahi vo villians type toh nahi hoga,,,,,,,,,,jiska picha mug's ko karna hai????????...
continue soon...
luv u...😊
Edited by ridzzi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting story!!!!!
Continue Soon!!!!😛😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting continuesoon... 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hye dear.. well I don't wanna throw tomatoes & eggs on u..😊 bt I wanna throw a kiss to u.. Beginning is really interesting.. CBI officer...wow.. plz giv d nxt part soon.. waiting..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow another story
luvd the start
so Priya is a CBI officer
awesome
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank u di for starting new ss
im waiting for this...thank u again

this is short bt anyways i loved it..so mugs is a cbi officer
wow...nd rt criminal h kya??

It seems vry intresting
di pls cont soon with rt entry n pls long one

ud soon di
love u

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow, i really liked it. This story has superb plot.

I will wait for the next part

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