Swaron: The first kiss- page 8 - Page 9

please update soon!!😊...can't wait anymore!😉

Heee heee heee!!🤣 Poor Taani!! Poorer Swayam!! Poorest Sharon!!😲🤣
Can't wait to read da next chapter.😆

Awww... Poor my Sharon.. She is such darling... She indeed made everything perfect just for Swayam's sake.. Bt this Swayam... Gosh... When is he gonna sudharofy..?? When will he stop being kiddo??*he looks damn cute being kiddo...:P*
She was so annoyed...lol... All n all, it was an awesome blossom update... U know, I was in class while reading this n I was grinning like an idiot..:P N wow, u really gave a veryyy long update... Bt I guess u forgot to pm me.. Nvr mind.. Don't forget next time...^_^

hi...sry cudnt reply...

amazing OS...beautifully written...excellent piece...just in the swaron style...its romantic and vth lots os swaron sweet moemnts...

loved how sharon was preparing and getting everythng ready fr swayam...swayam was vry sweet throughout...

loved how you have showed the desperation of sharon to get close to swayam and kisss...and her innocence that she has done special fr him and fr that she needs to get back somethng in special and thats a kiss...wow...

yess agree vth you...even gals have desires to get close to her BF...i too dont like gals are shown as some material and not have any wants of their own...it cannot be always guys making a move...

but yea in the nxt update i really want to see passionate side of swayam too...i hre he was totally engrossed...funny that he cudnt pay glance towards sharon...bechaari sharon...her anger at the end...perfectly put...like yelling at both of them...

plzzz update soon...

hey you have written a OS on swaron that was totally a heartbrkng one...can you give me that link????

Originally posted by: idiot_box

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="6" color="#ff0000">when are you going to update the monsoon special??????????please please please update soon!!!</font><div></div>

Updating soon, I promise. Just very busy with studies...

Originally posted by: luvSwaron4ever

hi...sry cudnt reply...

amazing OS...beautifully written...excellent piece...just in the swaron style...its romantic and vth lots os swaron sweet moemnts...

loved how sharon was preparing and getting everythng ready fr swayam...swayam was vry sweet throughout...

loved how you have showed the desperation of sharon to get close to swayam and kisss...and her innocence that she has done special fr him and fr that she needs to get back somethng in special and thats a kiss...wow...

yess agree vth you...even gals have desires to get close to her BF...i too dont like gals are shown as some material and not have any wants of their own...it cannot be always guys making a move...

but yea in the nxt update i really want to see passionate side of swayam too...i hre he was totally engrossed...funny that he cudnt pay glance towards sharon...bechaari sharon...her anger at the end...perfectly put...like yelling at both of them...

plzzz update soon...

hey you have written a OS on swaron that was totally a heartbrkng one...can you give me that link????

Thanks for liking and commenting 😊
Link you asked for:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/channel-v-dil-dosti-dance/3093808/swaron-os-this-love-warning-mature-note-on-pg3