ArHi OS: Together, yet lonely!*Reposted*

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Russell

@russelskhushi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

for a moment i thought Barun was khushis son!! nice story...keep going...

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

So sad! I wanted to cry!

Thanks for the Pm

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dimple288

@dimple288

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

wahhh ... love ur ideas.

u alwaz come up with cute concepts.

thanx for the pm

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rashmi

@morning_dews

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

awww that was a beautiful concept dear...loved it

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drooler

@drooler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

dat was really good,plsss continue it

thanks for the PM

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

a very moving os... nice of you to name the kids after the actors... seeing little barun drawing a picture that's all black was quite poignant as was the last scene of the father and son moving away hand in hand: Together yet lonely!

can imagine arnav as a Volatile Volcano but can't, for the life of me, imagine khushi as an Ice Maiden!

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srijaaa127

@srijaaa127

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Aweome OS yaar... Sooo nice
Loved it... Thank u soo much

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Harshita jain

@HARSHU246

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Res
i loved the last line the most
together yet lonely i loved the
title
it touched my heart
i am really sad
specially after reading the next part i had tears in my eyes
and yeah lol payal was the best character ditto our payalia ki copy hain
ROFL