OS: I AM SORRY KHUSHI..LAST PART/PG 57*NEW*

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arhilover55

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Posted: 13 years ago

#341

loved the ending.

thanks for the pm.

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603840

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Posted: 13 years ago

#342

i understand your point about the part being nsatisfying but it totally fine. it was just packed with emotion. woweee!

Ramadan mubarak to you too sis.

xxx

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KSG_luv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#343

Aww what an awesome part!!! Loved it!! 😃
And ramadan Mubarak to u too.. 😃

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starlight06

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Posted: 13 years ago

#344

nice ending😊I dont see how you would change the ending were you thinking that the bullet would hit Arnav and then his sister would see the monster that her husband is 😡

you did a good job

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Anaswar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#345

wonderful ... made me cry 😭😭😭

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PrncssOfHeart

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Posted: 13 years ago

#346

Ohh!! Senti kar diya yr...nyc ending...

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Apples94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#347

I loved the ending
It was fantastic

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Preeti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#348

Beautiful story

really enjoyed reading it

Hope u write more x

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inluvwivARHI

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Posted: 13 years ago

#349

Awsum ss...beautifully written...evri1s emotions were soo wel portrayed
Khushi was a bit tooo forgivin
Thanx foh da pm

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pantrossy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#350

Sandy...! U always made me cry

But i m so so much happy
U know what
U r fantastic writer n ur word touch my heart

It was also touchy but amazing

First i was scare while reading about discussion about khush's parents n Arnav's mom

I was almost senseless
I really scared that was she really gone to her parents?
After while i could breath
Finally khushi was well
Everyone was happy n so i m