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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: shenz_kriyaansh

Rishi... yeh kab update karne ka iraada hai???


Shenz di mai aaj hi pdate krungi aap sabse pehle padhna!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

awsome start
love ur FF
pls continue


thnx a ton dear...ill update 2day itself...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: divya_luvarsha

its just a fantastic story line

plzzz pm me

n m relly sorry 4 d late reply



Oh thnku...ill surely pm u...its alryt dont b sorry!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: rhu90

loved the cs...smriti wants kriya to dance...thanks 4 the pm...



thnx alot...ya i didnt lyk smriti in d show so, i changed her even her name!...dont b so formal its alryt!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Jiya_ArSha4Ever

Nice concept. Liking this KriYansh storyline. Rey did not fall for her at first sight. Kria as usual in her Rani Laxmi Bai Mode. They have now become friends. Wanna read further.Do PM me please



hehehe...thnku dear kriyas alwayz angry or rni laxmi mode u cn say...i cudnot make dem fyt aanmore so i made dem frnds ill surely pm you!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
awesome concept and CS
loved it
waiting for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: luv_arsha

awesome concept and CS

loved it
waiting for next part
continue soon



Aww...thnku im m ovrwhelmed by ur cmmnts!!!!!! ill b ploading next part super fast dont worry 5-7 mins me ho jaega i ws working on it only...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2
'aur kuch bataye apne baare me miss kriya?' rey asked
'hmm...as in u mean hobby?' she asked
'yeah' he said
'umm...i lyk sleeping, watching tv dont worry im not dat borr i lyk painting nd listining music too' she said
'nd dance?' he asked kriya stopped for a second 'kriya?' he said waking her up 'huh huh dance...i nevr gave much attention sorry' she said waking up with a start 'koi bat nai' he said 'rey mera ghar voh 2nd vala hi hai ill manage aap yahin utar do' she finally said 'r u sure? me drop kar deta huh na dont worry' he said 'oh dont bother ill go' she said 'as u wish!' rey answered he got down and helped her down she left saying thnku as she ws going she turned back she saw rey still standing dere "bye" she waved he waved back nd left she too got inside her house she rang d bell-
her mom opened the door 'how ws ur 1st day beta?' she asked 'awsome mom it ws just awsom' kriya answered 'did u dance?' sunita asked 'maa, mene aapko pehle bhi kaha hai mujhe dance krna pasand nai plyzz mujhe force mat kiya karo' kriya said 'but tum kitna accha dance krti ho u shud dance ur dad too wanted u 2 bcome a dancer!' she said 'enough mom, me room me jaa rhi huh kuch kam ho toh bula lena' she finally said nd headed to her rum...
As she sat on her bed two tears ran through her eyes only she knew how much she missed her dad d way he taught her to dance d way he cared about her everthing 'how cn mom ovrcome it so easily?' she asked talkin to herself suddenly her mom cme inside her room she didn't wanted her mom to realise how much she missed her dad she quickly wiped away her tears 'mom aap? kuch kam tha toh bula letin na me aajati' she said but her mom came nd hugged her 'i know u miss him i miss him too but all we cn do is nothing we cn hv a new start dats all if ever you feel alone/lonely come to me ok?' kriya cudn't say a word she had been misunderstanding her mom she just hugged her tightly both mom nd girl talked for a while cried together nd den sunita left her alone...(enough i cnt write anymore emotional stuff now im swtitching hope u guyz dont mind?)...

Next day-
rey ws searching for vicky but he cudn't find him anywhere finally he led to boyz locker rum he saw vicky sitting dere md playing game on his cell phone
'i swear agar aur 5 min baad tu mujhe milta toh me tra gala daba deta' rey yelled 'kya hua kuch kaam tha kya?' vicky said still indulged in d game finally rey took his cell frm his hands nd yelled 'team ke dancer kon dhundega tra baap?' 'arrey baba dad ko pareshan kyun karna obviesly ham milkar dhundenge!' he chuckled 'tujhe joke sujh rha hai yahan me mra jaa rha huh! koi bhi accha audition de hi nai rha!' rey shouted again 'yarr vese tu kal kahan tha kal toh audition ka 2nd day tha na?pure din gayb tha? akhir tha kahan?' vicky said in teasing tone 'voh kal...kal..me..me thoda phass gya tha' rey said 'kiske saath aur kahan?' vicky teased again 'mere pass aur bhi bahut kaam hai paka mat' he said nd ws about 2 leave wen he saw neha at d gete 'dude, ur chick!' rey said 'neha! kahan?' vicky quickly kept game aside nd searched for her here nd there reys eyes hrew wider 'abey me itne der se kya tympass kr rha tha...neha ko dekhte hi rang badal gye!!' it ws reys turn 2 tease 'paka mat..bakws ke liye tym nai hai!' vicky yelled before rey cud reply

vicky left to meet neha 'neha tum yahan?kuch kam tha toh bula leti me aajata' vicky said sweetly 'oh dats so sweet vicky, mujhe ye dnce team ke papers ka kaam tha tume hi dhundh rhi thi' neha replied 'haan toh chalo canteen me chaltein hain vahan kuch khaa bhi lenge aur kaam bhi kar lenge..' vicky said he quite frgot about his cell rey who ws standing far nd enjoying vickys talk saw vickys phone lying he called 'VICKY!' but he already left 'lagta hai aajkal sabke phone lautane ka theka mene le rakha hai...kal uss baatcutter ka aaj iss gadhe ka ab me nhi lautane vla jab grl land se v..apas aayega tab le lena khud hi...vese ye kriya hai kahan?' he said remembering to meet her her quickly left 2 see where she ws he searched d whole clg nd den found her tslking to a boy maybe exchanging notes he quickly went 2 her 'kriya tum?yahan?' he said luking at d boy 'oh hi rey vo me kuch notes le rhi thi' kriya said rey said d boy to leave 'kriya u cn ask me watever it is m dere as a frnd' rey said 'dats so sweet rey but aap mjhe mile nahi isliye mene notes lene ka socha' she answered 'its ok come ill introduce u to my frnds' rey said kriya followed him...

Dey headed towards canteen. Rey saw vicky neha sitting on a table together he went to dem 'hey!' he said 'hi rey' neha said 'hi rey tujhe kuch kaam tha?' vicky said giving him signals to leave 'haan actually..' neha cutted him 'vo sab chodo ye batao ye kon hai?' neha said smiling towards kriya 'she's kriya, kriya ghai' rey answered 'hi' kriya said to neha 'hi kriya come here hv a seat' neha replied sweetly kriya smiled nd sat with neha 'hi m vicky' vicky said 'oh, hi m kriya' she said 'new addmission?' vicky asked 'yeah actually my mom got transfered so we had to come here mumbai' she said 'enough yaar vicky pakao mat let us grls talk' neha said kriya gigled rey pulled a chair nd sat wid vicky soon neha nd kriya became gud frnds dey strated 2 talk about grl stuff 'yaar ye grls kitni jaldi frnds ban jati hain!' rey said to vicky 'sai me yaar kya inhe mile 3 minut bhi hue honge?' vicky replied "nope!" rey said 'umm...grls ye fasion express baad me chalana ryt now we're gtng bored!' rey said kriya luked cutely at him which effected him alot final;y she luked other side 'ok guyz ab me chalti huh classes attend krni hain' kriya said 'arrey kriya abhi nai aaj classes chodho na chalo shopping chaltein hain ham dono ki choices bhi miltin hain mazza aaayega plyz say yes!' neha said 'thk hai' kriya gigled 'boyz tum log bhi chalo?' neha said vicky quickly stood up "chalo neha ill tell u wat will suit u d best!' vicky said 'rey aap bhi chalo na?' kriya said..'nai kriya tum sab jao mujhe nai aana!' rey said 'rey aap mri baat nai manoge? plyz plyzz aao na?' she said nd made a puppy face 'ok baba chalo!' rey said evry1 shouted 'yay!!!!' kriya luked at rey nd said 'Thnku rey!' 'ur welcom baacutter' he said it ws enough to make kriya blush she slightly blushed wich made rey side smile...
At the Mall-
kriya ws totally confused to decide wht she shud take nd wht not 'umm...may i help u...only if u dont mind?' rey asked 'sure' kriya said both searched for a long time dey exchanged some glances kriya luked at rey nd ws caught she quickly luked at the other side after along time rey took out a miniskirt nd said 'kriya ye try karo!' kriya gasped 'wat? ye? me? hv u compleatly lost it?' kriya shouted 'shsh...dime...plyzz kriya mere liye 1 bar pehen ke dikha do plyzz me tumhare kehne par aaya na mall itna nai karogi? plyzzz' rey requested 'par rey yahan toh vicky neha bhi hain na?' kriya said 'voh log toh vahan hain tum mujhe Trial rum me change karke dikha skti ho? only if ur comfortable Trust me me kisi ko yhn nai aane dunga' rey said kriya headed to Trial rum she got inside 'hey bhagwan baki ka kahan hai sirf itna hi!!!!!' she shouted wen she saw d skirt she quickly tried it nd came out she searched for rey 'rey? rey?' rey ws sitting on d couch outside of trial rum he ws waiting for her she cudn't walk properly but still she went rey heard her 'haan kriya yahan aajao' he said kriya followed d voice..rey ws sitting on d couch wen he saw her his eyes widened he stood up kriya ried to pull her skirt rey held her hand nd all he ws able o say ws 'wow..' 'kya?' kriya asked 'i...i mean u luk sizzilng super hot!' he said kriya slightly blushed...a strand of hair came on her face rey parted it with his hand...

Kriya's POV (in blue)-
He ws luking at me as i'm the only grl in dis world his eyes told me evrything he wanted to say i pulled my skirt down a little but he held my hand his touch made me feel special he ws close to me i cudnot face him anymore i got shy nd luked down maybe i blushed he complimented me he had a true accent in it i felt vrry shy his smile made me feel special i've nevr got dis kinda feeling it ws so new to me...i luved d way he luked at me...i m blushing hard although i dont want to...he parted my hair god a smile came on my face automatically i dont even know how! i dont know wat he must be thinking about me!

Reys POV (in red)
She luked so damn cute i dont know y i got up all i cud say ws 'wow' lyk a idiot i luked at her lyk i've nevr seen any grl before in my lyf she made me feel special by blushing touching her hand gosh i luved her touch its so cute to see dat she trusts me it made me feel so vrry special god dis girl is so cute i wanted to see her so i parted her hair a smile came on her face i complimented her she luked down ws she ashamed or just shy she ws blushing hard i didn't wanted to leave her hand no girl has done it to me something ws effecting me i dont know what!..

Back to story-
rey ws still holding her hand 'rey sab dekh rhein hain' kriya whispered 'toh?' he asked 'rey thoda door' she said nd went a little far rey pulled her dey came even closer rey smiled a little...rey luved her blushing face suddenly a small girl came nd said 'bhaiya didi ka haath chodo aap unhe tang kar rhe ho na?' rey ws shocked kriya left his hand nd ran to changing rum she changed back to her top nd legings while rey came to dat girls level nd said something in her ears nd slowly kissed her cheek kriya came out she saw all dis the girl ram to kriya nd called her down kriya bended to her level nd d girl kissed her cheek gently she said smthing in her ears kriya blushed a little after hearing dat she kept her hand on her cheek...
The msg wich girl said was-
'Kriya were luking incredible...i cudn't control myself here dis kiss is for you'
Kriya stood up she saw rey she came to him she said 'Thnxx rey' 'my pleasure' he said 'lets go?'he asked 'haan sure' kriya answered dey joined vicky nd neha 'Kahan the tumlog?' vicky asked 'Bas esehi!' rey said luking to kriya dey were caught exchanging glances...

Hope u all luved it as much as i did? so, now the question is will kriya ever dance again next part will clear the confusion till den stay tuned to 'Someone Compleated me'... i luved evryones cmmnts i rplied evry1s i think agr mene kisi ka scrap ya msg se rply nai kara toh plyzz batana...add me to ur buddy list if u want pms...enough of my bak-bak ab jaldi cmmnt likho!!!!!!!!

Precap- Kriyaansh Romance..vicky revealed truth to neha!!!!!
Edited by Luv_Kriyaansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
gud update...
Thankx 4 d pm
update soon

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