SWARON OS *going for the party* updated LAST part - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
Hey it was hilarious...wow from swayam spilling water on rey's face to vicky crying to rey smacking him🤣...awesome...cant wait for next part...and sharon saw his ring😆
hey i didnt get the pm😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amaznig update and yeah pm me when u write the next part thanks a lot
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i cudnt stop laughin😆😆.😆...super awsum
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Posted: 13 years ago
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d3 boys in desi boys avataar...nice!!!!!😈
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hilarious update,,boys doin poll dancing..😆..n sharon saw the engagement ring in swayam's finger...swayam to gya...
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Just read both the parts and this is going to be one hilarious OS !!! The boys crashing Sharon's HEN party and they're actually dancing to Desi Boys...LOL !!! Can't wait for the next update !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW!! :P Hilarious! Really.. Cont soon and PM me :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wooa..so swayam got caught..write d next part soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART -3

WHAT THE HELL!! Swayam...what is he doing here...😕

Sharon couldn't believe it her fianc was dressed as a stripper and dancing in front of her...

She knew why was he doing it..because it was her hen party..dat too arranged by simmi...😲

Sharon..where are you lost ??

Look at de guy man..He s so sexy...*pointing towards swayam* . Its your hen party..You should be the one enjoying it the most...

*with a devilish smile* Simmi ,i think you are right.. This is my Hen party and i will definitely enjoy it as it is arranged to celebrate my last night of freedom...

She said it loud enough,for swayam to hear..and from corner of her eyes she noticed his expressions...

Swayam jaw was wide opened...n eyes opened in shock..

*Sharon thinking in mind* MR shekhawat.."TONIGHT I WILL BE TEACHING YOU A LESSON"😈

Before simmi could speak..she saw Sharon walk behind the curtains...

Arey yaar swayam tu yahaan khada khada kya kar raha hai..??rey asked...

I m searching for Sharon..she is nt here...

The song got switched to *ANARKALI DISCO CHALI"... n wat swayam saw...He was wearing an expression as if he has seen a ghost..

Poor swayam..was sweating badly...🤡

"Sharon tho pataka lag rahi hai yaar" bharat commented..

Sach main..SHE IS SOO HOT..vicky and nilesh added..

Shut up guyz!! Woh tum sab ki bhabi hai...!!

Par lag bohot hot rahi hai aaj.. rey said...

Rey tub hi..ruk abhi kriya ko batata hoon...swayam was fuming with anger now..😡

All the boyz were jus staring at Sharon...😍.

Sharon was wearing a small blouse very small..the straps were like sphagetti.. and de skirt was dangerously and seductively low...😲

Swayam so wanted to jus kidnap Sharon from all these monster friends who were staring at her without even blinking there eyes...

All the girls started shouting.."GO SHARON..WOO HOOO!! Shake it baby!! "

He turned to find Sharon in front of him...wearing a seductive smile..

So will you dance with me sexy?? Sharon asked..

*de song got changed to Zara zara touch me*

Before swayam could reply..sharon got hold of his shirt..an pulled him in the center of the room..an started dancing the same way swayam was doing it some time ago..

Sharon pulled him more closer to her leaving no space for the air to pass between them...

She was dancing placing her hands all over his body..

Swayam was behaving as if he was seeing a live horror movie...when the song came to an end..sharon pecked him on his cheeks...N asked huskily..

"SO HAD FUN ...??"..

Swayam was dumbstruck...after hearing sharon's question...

She kissed him again on his other n whispered..next time remember to remove your engagement ring darling!!😈

Saying this she walked past him...leaving him behind in a state of shock...😲😲😲

From dat day..he sweared to god he wil never gate crash..any of the sharon's party..

Poor boy "GOT THE BITTER TATSE OF HIS OWN MEDCINCE"

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Thank you all for you support..you comments mean a lot...🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
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😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

Bechara Swayam . Loved this OS.

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