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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

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Congratulations on the new thread! 👏🥳

The update:

That was fantastic! What a cat and mouse game Arnav and khushi are playing! Testing each other, dropping little baits! Amazing! I have said this before too, I'll say it again! I wish the show makers would take something from your FF, there is so much to be shown and your creativity is fantastic!

Yash: how over joyed both mamiji and naniji would be if they only knew the relationship status between Yash and anjali! I can only imagine the glee with a sputtering mamiji and naniji with a harassed laxmiji! 😆

You have here an amazing creation, and kudos to you for keeping it the way it started! Not losing steam, constantly filled with amazing new ideas and subtle plots, give and take, entertainment, guttery and heated interactions, humor, all of it!

Thank you!

Edited by JerryTheMouse - 13 years ago

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Samiya

@SamiyaIPKKND

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Congrats on your new thread Maya... you truly deserve it... love the new Khushi... so whats ASR gonna do??? the story keeps getting better and better😃

Since everyone is rhyming I thought why not me

Maya!!!!

teri kya yeh kaya

tune bana di deewana

O Maya!!!

I know I suck big time🤣... I'm mad!!!😕

un'res...

How the hell do you manage to surprise me all the time?? every single update!!! I'm hooked... have you ever thought about professional writing? I think you'd excel in that... seriously girl do give it a shot😃... you'd atleast have one customer ... Meee!!!!😃

Edited by SamiyaIPKKND - 13 years ago

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

😛

I knew it...i knew this is what he would do. I also know he has not lost yet, and what he is banking on happening when she does meet Anjelica!!!! The SLY little bugger...gotta give him credit. He is not where he is by not using his WITS!!!😉 I love Khushi, but i have a feeling she too will into the trap inevitable, unintended of course, but nevertheless she will succumb.

Edited by --Nargis-- - 13 years ago

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kvgmatri

@kvgmatri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Congratulations on the new thread! You totally deserve it. So looking forward to more and more episodes of this amazing story!

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Krani

@Krani

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Congo on the new thread!

*Edit*

As if Khushi did not guess that Arnav had something up his sleeve. Okay, fine she loves the man and of course she is going to be worried if Arnav does something un-Arnav - such as coming home early. And of course she will be worried if he is "unwell"

But this is Arnav Singh Raizada! There is always something behind everything he says and/or does. Heck even if he comes and says he's hungry, he has an ulterior motive behind it! Hahaha

But I loved how Khushi realised the game he was playing - in fact I have to give it to both the characters.

Arnav was not going to back down, rather he was going to make Khushi do what he wanted her to do - that is leave the decision up to him. And what better way to do it?

But Khushi once again surprised him and took the challenge, and is ready to keep him in "suspended terror" Great work Maya! Loving the characterisations and how this story is progressing!

I really do want to know what happens at the meeting. Will Arnav appear all of a sudden? Will things get ugly? Will something exciting happen? I am really, really looking forward to reading the next update!!

Thanks for the amazing part! :)

Edited by Krani - 13 years ago

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Jignasha

@pal89711

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

congrats on the new thread :D i absolutely just love your writing and look forward to every update...I like the way you capture each emotion of all the characters...keep up the awesome work

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s2612

@s2612

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

congrats on new thread...
loving this khushi who is playing equally to asr
and with the anjelica storm is still brewing...will be loving when it hits!!