||Simple Pleasures|| (Falling In Love-Pg 21-Aug 4) - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
aditi square shayad tum logo ne pura post nahi kia...
aise kaise ho sakta hai..sad ending...
love your concept and story...
love the emotions...
but next time i want happy ending...nahi toh...
Edited by dildostidance19 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
serioualy y do u have to put a sad end...

ui resent sad ends...

amazing work...

but i don't like it that much since sad end hai...


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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
seems like the aditi magic is spreading now...
awesome guys...pure bliss...

sad but intense and thoughful...making it sad going the practical way was a great and superb effort on your parts...

hoping to see more such OS(all the more happy ones this time) from the dynamic duo or rather A2...kudos for bringing it out so well...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
Tu rukh main aa rahi hoon bahot saare jutte pade hain mere paas kisi ko marna hain usse. Bhaag le ek din tu pkri jangi!!!


Beautiful ff wish it had a happy ending. Feel sad for Kriyansh. OS main bhi sab un dono ko juda kar dete hain 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
unres...

beautiful os...

hate d end though...

continue soon if u can...

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dats it fr now...

sry a bit unwell...
Edited by Born2Dance - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
hey guys it was awesm man bt sad ending kyu kiya change it to happy ending na plz, hamare kriyansh par sad ending suit nai karti yar
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
Are tum donop ne tho bahut acha Os likha hai.
Kabhi haat masi tho milo.
Gale se la lungi tum dono ko.
This was a touching os.
Loved it.
It was superb and Amazing one.
Loved it a lot.
Thanks for the pm..


Smily nd Pari kaha bhage ja rahe ho tum dono.
hamare haat mai tho jarur miloge nah.
Bachke kaha jane wale ho IF se..

Haat mai jaldi milo batathihu sad end ka parinam kya hota hai.


Give next OS soon.

Posted: 13 years ago
#68
It was Was awesome more dan the concept I loved ur way of presentation and writing awesome work dear 😃
Edited by enrique - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
dat was an amazing os but wid a sad ending 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
it was vry painfull
but love never dies
but tum logo ne oppposite
kar diya
bth aditis rock
do u continue
and thnxx for pm

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