The Mirage and Oasis...New FF: Chapter 13 updated

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srmirji

@srmirji

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#481

I know show ending is sad...as a matter of fact an empty feeling...

look into old episodes ...you have the creativity to write...so do some magic ...put something in words...bring a smile to yourself and us...

I can't write so ...I know its easy to say...but you can do it.

thx.

sri.

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rima

@rima

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#482

Originally posted by: srmirji
I know show ending is sad...as a matter of fact an empty feeling...

look into old episodes ...you have the creativity to write...so do some magic ...put something in words...bring a smile to yourself and us...

I can't write so ...I know its easy to say...but you can do it.

thx.

sri.

will do

that is why i got back to writing

many dreams to fulfill

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Priya

@ashi.1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#483

nice update dear...

simply awsmm, just loved it...

khushi is sooo innocent...

arnav feeling guilty, ha ha ...

pls update soon this time...

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choochootrain

@choochootrain

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#484

Thank you for updating finally!!!...we r all.v upset abt e endg of e show sweety...but i hope u r.ok.now...was faithfully checkg for ur updates n i.even reread all.chpters...

Back to e story, kushi.is sooo scared of her papa n tat makes arnav angrier...hope tey'll settle down n enjoy e view at least...
Thank.u once again...

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124555

@124555

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Posted: 12 years ago

#485

nice update di...

pls continue soon...

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TabbyJ.

@TabbyJ.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#486

hehe loved the update!!
i could understand poor khushi
its not her fault
but in corperate world u have to do this!
anyways its just the beginning for her

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ArSh23

@ArSh23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#487

Great update! Can't wait to read the next part!

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melonie

@melonie

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#488

Rima,

OMG so so so happy that you updated. I was thinking of sending you a PM 😳 Thanks for updating 🤗

Wonderful update...I hope you will continue to update often.

Like I said before yaar I can understand this Khushi so well. Someone who has a father like her will only understand her worries and fear.

Arnav tends to get rude when ever things don't go his way. So not surprised with this behavior.

Please cont soon...

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rima

@rima

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#489

Originally posted by: melonie
Rima,

OMG so so so happy that you updated. I was thinking of sending you a PM 😳 Thanks for updating 🤗

Wonderful update...I hope you will continue to update often.

Like I said before yaar I can understand this Khushi so well. Someone who has a father like her will only understand her worries and fear.

Arnav tends to get rude when ever things don't go his way. So not surprised with this behavior.

Please cont soon...