The Mirage and Oasis...New FF: Chapter 13 updated

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Venilla

@Shivanee31

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#241

I am really enjoying this story. It gave me goosebumps when he touched her arm. That seems so cute.

Also Khushi's reaction and attitude seem so natural and real. I really love the update. You've really done a great job, as usual.

Thanks for the PM.

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@rubys07

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#242

GREAT UPDATE!👍🏼 so Khushi's trying hard to not to fall for him but i don't have much hope regarding that😆..thanks for the pm and do pm me for the next update as well.😊

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Archu

@cocoatree

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#243

Awesome work !! rima

great writing😊

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Shruti Gupta

@Shruti21

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#244

nice... its like a stress buster

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ASADsweetZOYA

@ASADsweetZOYA

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#245

👏nice one dear

loved it😳

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Sharmini Segari

@Chimpsy

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#246

🤣 🤣 🤣

Had a good laugh reading the update... 😆 Why do all Arnavs have to be such big bullies??? He's not letting the 3rd slogan go just like that, I'm certain... So Rima, do your magic and whack him real hard with a slogan that'll give him a massive heart attack- not to kill him but enough to get his high-up-in-the-air nose, come tumbling straight down to earth!

Such arrogance!!! But, I love it! 😳

Edited by Chimpsy - 13 years ago

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akanshya

@kingofme

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#247

lovely...

thanks for the pm...

cont soon...

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nareshSV

@nareshSV

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#248

Woah...man I wonder how khushi is gonna fall in love with him and how arnav is gonna fall in love with her and how they will come out of the problem of khushi's parents...