The Mirage and Oasis...New FF: Chapter 13 updated

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thechaigirl

@thechaigirl

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#221

Nice update..loved it...

A cliffhanger now will have to pester u to update soon 😉

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multifaceted

@multifaceted

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#222

Great update. Loving the storyline. thanks for the pm

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starzyasha

@starzyasha

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#223

Wonderful update!!! Can't wait for the next part...
Thank you for the pm :)

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#224

I think Arnav Singh raizada will fall hard for Khushi before khushinshows any interest

I loved the update...and when's here conversation are always fun to read...when he touched her arm I got sooo excited

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arushi05

@arushi05

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#225

Well this was a very flirty update. Loved and enjoyed reading it. Loved the conversation between arhi in the cafe. Update soon for i really want to know what khushi will do next. Thanks for the pm. Pm me when you update next.

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hararnav

@hararnav

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#226

thts cool..

waitin for their next encounter

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reallyhappy

@reallyhappy

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#227

she has olrdy fallen 4 him..no mttr wt..n he 2 wud gradually fall 4 her,,dt toh v ol no..juz depends on d tym..:)update soon n do pm me..😛😛😛😛thnxxx😊😊😊😊

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Flame.

@Flame.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#228

I absolutely loved it when she was so apprehensive about her looks. 'Do I look okay?' 'Jeez! I hope i'm not looking ugly'. These are instant reactions of any girl when she spots her crush and I loved it when you added something like that. It was soo damn natural <3 Lovely! 👏

I like this Arnav a lot. He ain't like that jerk ASR! He's calm, cool and witty. Perfect 😎

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#229

Woo! Khushi's behaving like a pimple-struck teenager!😛 bt who wudnt if its arnav singh raizada in frnt of u! She's done for! And wen he touched her arms..ooo..la la😉
so dis arnav singh raizada is hard to gt..so is khushi kumari gupta gonaa gt undr his skin??or will it b asr himslf to fall for her madly n seduce her..well, m gonna sit back n enjoy!