The Mirage and Oasis...New FF: Chapter 13 updated

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#171

loved the update khushi is so cute her telling her mom she can beat up five guys loved it she already made asr smile nice thanks for the pm

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thechaigirl

@thechaigirl

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#172

Nice update Rima...

Lol khushi is cute...she can take down 5 men 🤣

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Preeti

@preetihere

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#173

For a minute i thought he was being mean to that lady...that was a cute instance to show his softer side!
I feel like eating all those things mentioned there! Yum!
nice pace to ur story Rima...

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batgirl67

@batgirl67

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#174

i loved how she was eating and talking to her mom while arnav stood their smiling at her!

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multifaceted

@multifaceted

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#175

Lovely update. Like the way you have showed the characters and the storyline. Thanks for the pm

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reallyhappy

@reallyhappy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#176

intrstin..loved d way u narratd her family n her bckground..n lovd d last part more indeed..Arnav smiled😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉grt..dt lyn was ossum..she was so thin dt d breez...update soon n do pm me..😛😛😛😛😛thnxxx😊😊😊😊