ArHi FF: Jaane Doh Naa Updated 150 [Feb 4, '13]

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mandu

@mandu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#551

Im really enjoying your story..

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Anjinie

@Anjinie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#552

It's sad what happened to. Ayesha, hopefully she is she strong to bounce back. Never expected Arnav to stand there and here Ayesha out. Maybe after this incident things will change.

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ashred12

@ashred12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#553

i hope khushi takes ayesha with her if she goes with arnav...

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arnavbarun

@arnavbarun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#554

really a heart wrenching update!!!

not only ayesha's outburst, khushi's helplessness and above all arnav's way of handling the whole thing touched me!!!!

i think nayan and ayesha's can make khushi realize that arnav and her relationship is far better and arnav is much better a person than she gives him credit for...

may be ayesha can make her realize that threr is still hope for her as arnav always loved her and still does...she can give life a second chance which ayesha herself doesn't have bcoz nayan never loved her in the first place!!!

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shagun05

@shagun05

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#555

i agree with you... these scenes... these conversations are the heart and soul of any piece of writing and how beautifully you express these is just sooo good. I could just imagine both of them actually sitting somewhere on a balcony and having that conversation.

Beautiful work!!!

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amritafan

@amritafan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#556

awww i feel so bad for ayesha.

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zeedia

@zeedia

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#557

Great update
Ya you're right ayesha is a complicated character

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Swetyz

@Swetyz

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#558

That's really heart wrenching... how much did she suffer...no wonder she hates all men...
I hope the equation between her and arnav change a bit now and she can see the positive side of him
She definitely should get all the happiness..

can't wait for next update..thanks for the pm
Really its wonderful update

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farheen75

@farheen75

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#559

A heart wrenching but amazing update... Felt so sorry for Ayesha but at the same time I am very happy that she at least slapped him in front of everybody and now the rest will be done by Arnav to completely ruin that scum... It felt so nice to hear Arnavji from Khushi's mouth at the end and Arnav's gratitude for Ayesha for looking after Khushi bcz even Khushi is an orphan but at least she had a protective and loving upbringing unlike Ayesha and doesn't know how men act like vultures to get what they want so Arnav can't thank Ayesha enough for keeping her safe.

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#560

Ayesha while spilling her inner most thoughts also revealed how panicked she is about loosing khushi.. I was expecting some reassuring words from Arnav abt it..

I loved what Arnav said at the end.