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Update was too good

Wonderful, lovely and absolute mind-blowing to read this update. I really felt as if I am watching a beautiful marriage ceremony being shown on the TV. The way you write the scenes and the dialogues are too good, and it is very natural, something that you can relate to in your daily life. That is the best quality of your FFs. They are so related to normal life and they always leave me with a desire for wanting more. Really looking forward to the next part. Update soon and Thanks for you pm.

Originally posted by: ...Doctor...

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I'm first! 🥳

Will edit it tonight! Bye!

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OMG! This was freaking awesome! Loved it! I'm so excited Rae.

They are finally getting married..like seriously..Yipee!

I loved it to bits!

Ayaan! ughh! Kitni baar samjhana padta hai. I'm repeating once again for you since I love you so much, now listen carefully- No girl, yes no girl can deny your proposal because you are a cute, sweet, adorable, handsome, hot, naughty & ambitious guy, in short you are every girl's dream man. So stop underestimating yourself!

Hahahahaha! Tedha hai ladka! :p 😆

Sama : Tedha hai par mera hai! ;) :D

Akshay-Mamu convo was perfect Rae. I always wanted to read something on them. Glad to know that Akshay respects Arnav so much & also considers him as a major part of his life. He is like a father figure to him & I'm glad that he means so much to akshay! Can I just hug Akshay & priyanka. They are adorable!

Yeah, yeah go ahead! :)

And I have tried to show that Akshay and Arnav share a deep strong bond throughout this FF. :)

Bete ki shaadi ho rahi & they are still romancing. Come on guystime to grow old, kab tak teenage lovers ki tarah behave karoge 😆

Pyaar ki koi umar nahin hoti! 😆

"Really, Khushi, really? Are you going to act like TV wali saas and...kya tha woh...Sama ka shoshan karogi kyonki usne tumhaara beta chura liya?"

LOL! Trust Arnav to say this. Khushi ke saath rehkar his sense of humor has improvised a lot.

I think Arnav has always had a wicked sense of humour! ;) :D

They'll never stop teasing him..will they? But I enjoy their teasing a lot. They are such a cute, nice family. Awww Khushi loves them all. Saas ho toh aisi- Karan says not me 😆

Hahahahaha! Okay! Agar tumhaari saas hoti toh tum Ayaan ki patni hoti...aur woh spot toh Sama ne reserve kar liya hai! ;) :D

Hayeee! Two hotties together..sigh..I love you both so much! Arnav teasing khushi..hmm..me likey. Arnav teasing Ayaan..again me likey!

Finally! Sama's here! They look awesome & your description was perfect. Their feelings were portrayed beautifully Rae, I loved each & every word. Sama's hesitation, Ayaan's blush, Sama's shyness & Ayaan's irritation on being teased was perfectly written.

*Bows*

And the song 😍 What should I say!

Finally is ending! 😲 No..don't do this! *wipes tear* I'll miss Finally like hell!

Awww! Finally! shall miss you too! :)

P.S.- Mature content *cough* I say YES! 😳

Bigde hue bachche...hayye. :p

P.P.S- Update soon!

Originally posted by: meera30

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Yep. It's official. You want to kill me. Aye Kaash Ke Hum? Awww...

Haha! Its one of my favourite songs! :)

And what a chapter. Sigh! Sigh! Sigh!!

A little peek into Akshay's conversation with Arnav - Beautifully done. They were similar, weren't they, hardened hearts softened by the woman they love..I love Akshay (and why must I decide,,,I won't.)

Okay. Dont decide! 😆

And yep, they were. Both agonized by their past, shown the way out of it by love. :)

And Ayaan and Sama look beautiful.

And the moment where they see each other...Yep. Sigh Sigh!

All the teasing, the nervousness, more teasing, the wait, the annoyance...perfectly captured

*Bows*

And the little moment between Arnav and Khushi - woh kya kehte hain..shoshan..haha! Had me laughing. But the line after about the hurt now more lik faint battle scars...beautiful analogy. That's what it is.

The way Arnav said 'shoshan' just really got me and I decided that it could be used in this chapter so I did! ;) :D

But at the same time, it was not a happy time for either and hence the battle scars...because now, after everything, they are happy. :)

Glad you liked it.

Such a warm and fuzzy update. Mush is highly underrated. It can pick you up like nothing!

Hahahahaha! Yep, it can. :)

I loved it. Perfect for a Friday evening!

Originally posted by: -_-harsh42

Awww. . . . . .
It was so sweet an update, it gave me diabetes! 😃 😛

Loved the teasing, and revelation of Arnav's "Topmost secret talk", and Ayaan's annoyance. . .

Thanks for the PM, Rae. . . .

wow...Beautifully written...I just love this entire family...The bonding that they all share especially the cousins...too sweet

So...I dont remember exactly where we were *cough* spamming *cough* about it, but I distinctly remember saying I wanted Arnav to strip off that black shirt the first time we saw him in that which was way before the precap...

^ Rae aapke charan kahan hai?

Tum keyboard ko mere charan samajh lo! ;) :D

^ And I was like dude I love GH, just throw them out of RM & let them stay here. We always get a shirtless Arnav in GH ☺️