Res--
Ae kaash ke hum hosh mein ab aane na paaye...So beautiful Rae. I am commenting after reading it two times, and I don't think I'm satisfied, still.
I liked what Akshay told to the jittery Ayaan, and the talk between Akshay and Arnav was so beautiful. So realistic and most of all, gave us glimpses of what he may have done to turn around his life with Khushi. Sigh, too good!
Aur aap bade hi kanjoos nikle, maana Ayaan ki shaadi ho rahi hai, parr Arnav Khushi ke romance ka screentime thodi na kam karna chahiye. 😆
But yes, I cracked aap at the shoshan part, very smart Rae:)
And then the clothes you gave us for them, they are so beautiful. I had seen it after I read the chapter, but your descriptions are so, so wonderfully written. 🤗
Also, I loved the thoughts buzzing around in both their minds on seeing each other, it was nothing short of perfect.
Lovely chapter Rae, I wish Finally! could go on, and on. (This is me ranting, ignore :p)
P.S. Ayaan/Sama's relationship's charm lies in their innocence, I don't know they are kind of different then ArHi. More on the peaceful zone. Does that make any sense?
Anyways I feel, don't give a completely mature part to AySa, include bits, but let it be more on the romantic edge. And this may seem highly confusing, so feel free to ignore it :P
Edited by mistyrains - 13 years ago
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