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curiousbookworm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#671

Wow!!! This is moving! This story is moving! Right in time for hot cocoa season :D

Do you go to Stanford by any chance? :)

lOl! Love ! Update soon :-)

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Joti

@winnie7500

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Posted: 12 years ago

#672

"Even in winter, wrapped up in layers, he still managed to look amazing. She noticed that his hair no longer fell on forehead, but they were pushed back and he now supported five o'clock stubble. He looked even more sexier that before and Khushi was slowly getting sucked into his charm."

-- cue me drooling* I swear, this just reminds me of a burberry trench commercial..gorgeous hunk with "brown and green speckled eyes", and honey coloured skin with locks of hair falling onto his forehead, increasing the intensity of his gaze and.. Okay, sorry going off topic here. But you get my point, right? That your 'descriptive sentences/clauses/paragraphs/lines/etc' still exudate amaaazing powers of..power. In fact, they cause a person to enter a whole diff realm!

Going back to the verrry main point: you updated!!

And, best of all: I enjoyed it immensely 😃

I love how Khushi's grown, and how Arnav now sees that too-esp in the Mark scene.

This was a chapter filled with mystery, the collision of the past into the present--which sang the song of destiny and fate, coincidences! Everything was inter-mingled, and it was soo.. refreshing? It was good. It is good. You haven't lost your touch. I could very easily picture the background/scenes, the outfits of arnav and khushi, the atmosphere..

It was good. Like reeeaally reaally good. So thank you for updating. And setting us all on the edge of our seats, because another meeting/encounter between arnav and khushi will happen..the question that remains is when!

Oh, and the last bit-the email-reminded me of a novel. An infamous novel. Know which one I'm talking about.. 😉

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arhilover55

@arhilover55

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Posted: 12 years ago

#673

I am so happy you are back.

I missed reading this story so much.

Loved the update.

Can't wait to read more.

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

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Posted: 12 years ago

#674

Yayyy!!! You're back! Well worth the wait, I tell you!

Sooo Arnav and Khushi renew their acquaintance in an unorthodox way and it seems Arnav is a new guy after everything he went through.

I hope the 'making amends' lunch leads to something more. I can't wait for the discussion about THAT night where insults were hurled and where Arnav took a long hard look at himself. It would do good for Khushi to realise how her words affected him.

Thanks for the update!!

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#675

Aazing update glad to...have you back

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pooja0978

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Posted: 12 years ago

#676

This is one of my favourites... Glad to have you back...

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zeedia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#677

OMG OMG OMG u r BACK..yippieee... 😛
I m soo happy...
The update was brilliant...finally they come across each other..
Let's see if khushi accepts the lunch ahem date with arnav

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#678

hey found ur FF while i was going through Fiction forum...
i loved the concept...everything about the story especially LONG updates...i so love them all...plzz plzz add me as i would love to read more of this story... :)