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...Penknife...

@...Penknife...

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#541

that was a fabulous chapter..i totally see y u took a whole night..

Arnav's pain and helplessness was so well captured, and his inner turmoil really made it a touching and hard story, the way he tried to heal him and failed was magnificent...the guilt that slowly eating away and the pressure he felt...ur way of explaining it as so good that i could at least experience a little bit of it...i really loved that u did such a long chapter solely on Arnav...hats off to u on this awesome chapter...

and he has met his khushi again...!

!🤗loved it

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#542

Wow! I'm speechless!!

Poor Arnav (never thought I would say that), but deep down he is an OK guy and that's why these things got to him. He needed this meltdown to progress as a human being. Looks like he's beginning to come out the side...

Question is: will he blame or...maybe not thank...but accept that Khushi was the catalyst...?

Amazing writing and description of someone going through this kind of emotional breakdown!

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Roses_ZaYa

@Roses_ZaYa

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#543

I loved the ending of it

Edited by jav101 - 13 years ago

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srijaaa127

@srijaaa127

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#544

Awesome update chander 👏
Loved it...

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#545

They met again...fantastic!!!!!!! Loved it

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khusiarnav

@khusiarnav

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#546

U have almost killed me when i was reading wat arnav went through... oh my!! such along journey!!
i have to give u credit for making different how arnav tried to get over the voices and memories.. i was somewhere expecting him to go after khusi but I am so glad he didnt!!!
well done and welcome back.. it been a while!!

loved the update... thank god they met and the first snow.. wow... waiting for next!!

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FATHIMA BANU

@FBANU

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#547

awesome update👏👏... i know that the girl will be khushi only😛... cant wait for the next update😊😊⭐️... plzzz dont take too much time yaar...😉😉😉😉

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SARA

@zuaireah

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#548

That was an awesome update...Well Arnav's past made it more hard for him to cope with the accusations...but really glad he's getting back on his feet...Loved how you ended the chapter with a BIG BANG...they met again and in an equally unorthodox situation.

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Avani

@highonshows

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#549

res...

Chander that was fab...this chapter deserves a long comment but i am honestly very much pressed for time rite now...so i shall try to do so in a day or 2...

But one thing i'll surely tell u,...my heart was aching for Arnav...i honestly cried feeling his pain n how he he was trying to push it away ,... n eventually dealt with it...the scene remineded me of the time in the actual show when he took off after finding out bout Khushi n Shyam...but this was brilliantly writting...n betiffig the timelines...ahhh what do i say ,,...u honestly have a gift of gab when it come to naratting a story...

shoot i have to go...but i'll come n edit...

The meetin was mondbliwing...n now i cant wait to hear alll that happend in 2 years with Khushi after she took of from that wedding...

ThnQ Chander for this delightful journey...

Avni

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Tia.0

@Tia.0

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#550

Oh poor Arnav. I love your style of writing. Indepth and visual description make it more interesting for me.

You should submit the Alcohol abuse part of the story to AA group. It was a very detailed description and scary. I'm sure if alcoholics read this, they will quit alcohol.

Yippieee... Arnav and Khushi meet again... Can't wait for the next update.