Phew - finally caught up! What an emotional roller-coaster!! Loved it!
Ch31 - wow you took a rather filmi route with your characterisation in this one!! Loved the update, lol but annoyed with Khushi!! Girl needs to learn to listen!!!
Ch32: The Fallen 1 & 2- Arnav has every right to feel pissed - so glad he didn't succumb to feeling an iota of remorse!! The guy had done nothing wrong and was clearly willing to explain everything!!
Damn - burning his soul!! I'm worried, where are you taking this story!? (Writing my comments as I'm reading lol so my thoughts may change direction!)
Damn the punch up scene was intense - can so picture Arnav laughing all the while getting hit, displays his courage!
Woah - he drove over the cliff into the lake!!? Nahiii!
Ch33: Varun Singh Raizada - Can't believe Arnav's strength!! *superhero alert*
Ok - Khushi is just plain pathetic at the moment, someone should have given her a tight slap!! It surely would have knocked some sense into her!!
Aww so Arnav really is a hero, to Varun none the less!! Love it!
Khushi's heart was tearing open. She had accused arnav for something he would never have done even in his dreams. She had pushed him away when he was going to tell her.
Finally!!! Uff, it took you long enough to realise that woman!!
Ooo this one had a GREAT cliff hanger! Would have been real mean had I been up to date with your FF!
Ok, I actually liked Sanaya in this chapter! Poor girl!!
Ch34: The Chamber of Secrets - I sense a Potter fan!!
Khushi now realized the real reason why arnav had tried to distance himself from her. Now she understood why he did some stuff for which he immediately used t repent. He was fighting with himself.
Love this part of his past!!! So dark and haunting; a character with some real history! Fascinating stuff!
Lol another cliff hanger! Chalo, at least Khushi admitted how wrong she was, and is now willing to make amends, whatever the cost! A fab update!!
Ch35: The Contract - Woah, I can tell this is going to be one hell of an emotional rollercoaster!
His eyes were not warm as they used to be. His eyes looked dead. As though he was a body without a soul.
Arnav: its raizada. Arnav Singh Raizada.
And saying that he pushed her with full force and khushi fell on deepika. Deepika helped khushi to stay still.
Damn, that was cold!!! But thank goodness he didn't warm up to her, the girl needs to repent before she can even think about going back to the way they were!! Dammit, why did she have to spoil it!?
Khushi: how will it be alright? He pushed me from himself. Those eyes of his never lie. Its all my fault. After he had removed the walls surrounding his heart I tore that heart open. I could see the emptiness in his eyes as though he was a body without a soul. A soul which I destroyed by my words.
*major sigh* the above reminds me of my Tortured Souls OS ' depressing stuff, and one which I can't get myself to finish!! Will have to motivate myself after reading this!
Great KO round!! Superbly penned!
Aansh: so your body is still able to move after that pounding?
Arnav: Humph. I was about to ask you that. Can your hands still work after punching me?
Aansh; you're going down.
Arnav: not in your life.
Lol love that he remains that dry wit and humour, even when being beaten to a pulp!! A great characterisation of Arnav!
Arnav: this always is and always has been your place. Under me.
So glad Arnav showed him his place; that ought to teach him a lesson!!
Ooo - I like the mention of Anjali Singh Raizada ' she's going to be a kickass character isn't she!!? I hope so!!
Ch36 - The pain in words - (great title!!)😉
Ooo so he's decided to read the diary!!?
Arnav: if I know that you cant do this then why didn't you know that I cant betray you. Why didn't you know that I had fallen in love with you.
OK - this was a FAB way of making his point!!! You can tell it hit home -finally Khushi will understand that her reaction towards him was seriously poor judgement on her part and dangerously foolish!!
That was short - but brilliant!! Kudos, enjoyed this one immensely.
Ch36: The understanding
Arnav put on a grey shirt. Anjali sat down on his bed and removed the pillows to make space for her to sit. Arnav smiled at Anjali and lay down putting his head on her lap.
A beautiful and tight bond between brother and sister!! Just what I want to see in the drama!
Glad Anjali is depicted as a strong woman in your FF ' a much welcome characterisation I assure you!
Anjali: NO. This is nothing like you. You are not responding to the problem at hand at all. You are shutting yourself away. It was a mistake on both sides. You should have told khushi about Varun and she should have given a chance for you to speak.
Arnav: is that what this is about. About saying whose mistake it is. Fine. Everything is my mistake. My whole life is a mistake. I didn't drown when I was younger, my mistake. Reading papa's last diary was a mistake. Can I call myself a raizada or is it a mistake too?
Anjali: CHOTTEY.
Anjali had raised her hand to slap Arnav across the face. But she was shocked listening to arnav talk like this. This definitely was not the arnav who cared about people. This was someone else living in a hell of chaos and confusion which was clearly evident in his eyes.
Anjali had tears in her eyes while having raised her hand. His word were piercing her.
Arnav: Hit me di. Why did you stop? Do I disgust you or are you also going to tell me that I don't belong in this family.
SLAP
*Whistles* Damn, talk about high voltage drama!!!! This was intense!!! And the dialogue was spot on!! Kudos for a fab update ' shoot, now I have to play the waiting game again!! Will look forward to your next update!
Kudos for your efforts - keep em coming! 😊
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