IPKKND FF: To See - Chapter 5 - Page 40 - Page 20

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Posted: 13 years ago
huh again arnav realised his mistakes or watever he did with nandini after she is gone forever
but i really liked the way u wrote the part of nandini watching from heavens and her talk with diety 👏

arnav reading HP my goshhh that my all time fav. book read it like 6 times😆(each of them)

and that portion of all frnds with khushi was indeed great
great work aashifa fabulous work👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aashifa, i cnt tell hw much i find dis cncept wonderful n refreshing..IPKKND has alwez stressd on d importance of eye cmmunication..bt dis ff is just goin d othr way..m curious to c hw u mk them cmmunicate without their eyes..
wen khushi was rmmbrng his kiss in her hands n trying to undrstnd hw his features r there was an air of sadness to it..it tugged at my heart..
arnav found her scent to b popcorn-honey..mmm..swt!..i cud imagine him kissing her hand..touching..
bt then wen he rmmbrd his late wife i felt d tears stinging my eyes n i wantd to go n hug him n cnsole him saying dat evrythn's gonna b fine nw..it was so heart wrenching *sniff*
D heaven was so moving..nandini loved him..bt he ddnt return her love in d same way..wanna knw more abt dat..
man, he reads HP!..gr8!..anothr reasn to love him more..
d frndshp bond u showed was just so wonderful..n touching..they r gr8!
n khushi's gttng an eye transplant..dats awsum news..she'll b able to c..😊
bt one thng abt d whole update stuck to my mind..hw quickly arnav's reactions to khushi chngd in just a matter of few minutes..its nagging me..
neway, gr8 update aashifa!
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Posted: 13 years ago
I is finally here! Sorry for the delay but had a sleepover and then was loitering around with friends. :p

Anyway, is that...ME?! :D

Its me! I am gonna meet Arnav! Eeeps!! *Crazy fan-girl moment* ;) :D

""Those eyes, that hair, oh Khushi Khushi Khushi" Rae teased again."

That is so me! LOL!

And Arnav...sigh. <3

PS - My hair is jet black (*touch wood* :) :p) and is you want more info to write about amazing me, please ask. ;) :D

Seriously though, I am so humbled and completely...I dont know the emotion...that you supported me this way! I have been having doubts about that one story and all of you guys are just so amazing in your relentless support (Varsha and Sona included)...THANK YOU so much, everyone! :)

Coming to the update, I loved that Arnav is now a changed man...dikhaaye na dikhaaye...and that Nandini is looking out from him from beyond!

Also if I may say so, Khushi has some amazing friends (Ahem... ;) :D) and I love the dynamics!

Great job and Thank You again! :)

PS - Shobhu, you cook?! I WANT CAKE! :D
Edited by AngelTeen - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
You lot have made my day *runs to hug*
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Posted: 13 years ago
GOSH !!

I missed out on such a nice update, I feel like crying my heart out, but thank god that you creeped into my scrapbook (see , creepwa does leave behind some trainers like you at times, which is a benefit for me, no offence haan😆) !! And Gosh !! This is so amazing !!

I coook ?? Seriously Aashi ? I woudl rather be the one with the camera !! Well, Im gonna have a lottle fight with you on who;s better with the camera now !! And I have pics taken by me to prove them 😉 !! OK baba, just joking ok !!

You know why I love this one dont you ?? OK, nahi pata to ab suno, well you asked for it, now bukhto !! The first being the way you;ve bought Khushi !! Khushi in the show, and most of the other FFs, well all the FFs ive read, Khushi's never ever been disabled in this way !! And that just makes her so much more special to me !!

And then the way you incoporated Sona,(Sonalika😉) , Rae( Im sure she'd be happy about that , Varsha !🤗(Im sorry Varshu, I havent read any of your updates either🤔) , you and me !1 I was like Gosh !! You just made me go mad !! And Sona with JK Rowling !! Yipee !! I was like isnt that something Im expecting in reality, if not atleast JKR, Im hoping to see a book by Sonalika alone !! And Rae !! Hahaha !! That was brought out so nicely about Rae ranting not knowing how to write,!! And Varshu ! She was the most mature and sort of calm decision maker, postive and all !! and I guess we both make the masti makers aling with Khushi !! The full toss nautanki waale !!


And then Arnav remembering kissing Khushi !! That flash was brought out so amazingly !! The way you show him suffer while thinking about Nandini, and his all too complicated emotions regarding Khushi was just the right perfect recipe mix for this update !! ( Since you made me the cook, I might as well call it the perfectly boiled, tossed and made penne pasta in white sauce😳 )

And then Nandini !! Awww !! The deity part was brought out perfect !! Arnav doesnt need to be perfect for me !! Never ! He just is amazing the way he is, cause he realizes when he's wrong and tries he's best to get punished for it !! No, Im serious he does !! And wait a sec, Rae called him ROWDY RAIZADA ?? ahahahha !! that was perfect !

And Khushi !! Oh !! I love how you write her here !1 Her fear, that maybe she wont be able to see !! Which bring me to my fear, I dont present food that bad ok !! And Khushi !! I lvoe her !1 That one place where she talks about seeing again !! And yes, the way she tries to visualise Arnav !! His lips and her trying hard to remember his feel !! That was so amazingly written !! One of the sweetest love at first feel types thingy !! I loved that part !!❤️

One again im sooo sorry for missing out on the update earlier Aashi !! I love you so much more !!🤗

Also, I loved the part where you put, we werent a group !!a family we are !! And I just want a group hug now too !! And this time I get to click the pic😉



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Posted: 13 years ago
Will you be updating soon Aashifah!? 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
Intense - Arnav never having allowed himself to love now living in regret of the loss of his wife whereas Khushi in a dark world is lighting up a candle of hope for herself with someone who has lost all hope...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

Kab updateyaaengi aap?



maybe 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...K's getting operated - hopefully will be successful!

Nandini will help unite A/K...some deity intervention...


-Sona


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Posted: 13 years ago
Update soon and Ramadhan Mubarak! 😛

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