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Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

Interesting CS and prologue...I specially liked three ranawat brothers...waiting for first update.



thanx sooo much dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

woowww...simply awsum..

u had really made me imagine it all...

with u writing..

seems like im watching a movie...

cont. soon..

thnx for the pm...


thanx sooo much
will update 2day
most welcum
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: shruja

awesome part!!
loved description
liked mysterious but still playing imp part in story!
loved entry of nandini! n her cheerful nature!
so old driver must be having some exp or info abt those creatures!
he consider her as his daughter! n got ready to take her!
but wht happend to his car? me too thinking its machanical error or else other kind?
ohh tht cute white rabbit must be msgner of our hero!
so she lost her way to return but not lost her confidence!
i liked her this quality
again forest played his part! who was behind bush!!
so our hero on the way to save her


thanx sooo much
I just luv mysterious stories
driver is a native so he was bound to know many things about the place
well none really found out till now what happened to the car
lol no the rabbit's not
yaar tu har cheez ko ghuma phirake Prithvi ke saath hi jodegi na 😆
bechare rabbit ko bhi baksha nehi 😆
yup all my female characters are strong n bold
hmm...lets c
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
o tho aaj ud miloega..
wow đŸ„ł
Nandini25 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: sweetnandu

Beautiful start..do update soon


thanx so much
will update 2day
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: sparksfly

wow !! wat a brilliant start !!!!

luvd it !!!
very mystrous n intrstng !!
it was amazng !!!
ur usage of words is awesum !!!!
uve descrbd d scenery n Nandni's thoughts beautifully !!
luv d story already !!
spell bindng descrption !!
waitng 4 more !!!
luv d tag line !!
luv u...


thanx sooo much
will update 2day
luv u 2
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

Great part..loved ur descriptive style...amazingly written.

continue soon.


thanx sooo much
will update 2day
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

o tho aaj ud miloega..

wow đŸ„ł


yup aaj milega update 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
sacchiii
aaj ud milega?
Di kab milega?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
Part 2

Her hand flailed in the air to hold something to save herself from falling but found nothing. She had resigned to her inevitable doom when she felt a strong grip as very cold fingers clasped around her dainty wrist. And the next moment she felt herself being yanked with force and her one hand landed into something as solid as a rock. She didn't dare to open her eyes until a melodious yet rude and chilled voice resonated in her ears.

Voice : " Are you blind? Cant you see where are you going? You were just a step away from death. If you are so desperate to commit suicide than search for a place where at least people can find your corpse."

Nandini's eyes snapped open at the exceptionally uncouth comment and as soon as she did so, she was left dazzled as her gaze fall on an exceptionally handsome face. For a moment her mind went numb while heart beats became erratic. The stranger was strikingly handsome with jet black hair, straight and pointed nose, rosy lips and dark black eyes. His hair was waving slightly to and fro due to the breeze playing around at the place. The most striking feature in his face was, however, his eyes. They were enchantingly beautiful yet so cold and emotionless. And also they seemed to possess a charismatic power which could entice people towards them However, soon the trance shattered and she was brought back to reality with a jolt again with the masculine, melodious yet cold voice of her saviour.

The guy : "Hello! Are you alive or are you already gone?"

Nandini broke away from his hold with a jerk. She narrowed her eyes and snapped back with her hands on her waist: "Watch it dude! Who the hell do you think you are? Okay, I do agree that you save my life and I'm really grateful to you. But even then you don't have any right to be that rude with me."

Guy : "I don't require to know from you what rights I possess and how should I exercise them. And if you are truly grateful to me for saving your life than just do me one small favour. From next time onwards just try to walk around with your eyes open."

Nandini's jaw dropped open, witnessing his utterly impolite manners. She stomped her foot on the ground and clenched her fists. The only thing she desperately hankered for at the moment was to wrap her fingers round the stranger's neck and squeeze the life out of him in one go. But she knew better than to actually put her thoughts into action.

Nandini glared at the stranger who was standing there with an utmost calm and blank face and retorted : "Oh just don't worry! Even if I'll land in any trouble in future I wont call you for help for sure and you too just don't bother to come to my aid."

The guy smirked a little and replied : "Wow I'm impressed! Atleast you have some sense, I see!"

Nandini scowled darkly : "Aaargh! You are so damn rude!"

The guy replied nonchalantly: "Offcourse I am and good that you know that too."

Nandini : "Go to hell!"

Saying this Nandini turned away not aspiring to even spare him a single glance and strode off in a random direction. However, she had to come to an abrupt halt as she was clueless about the way which she should take to reach the highway. She frowned in frustration.

Nandini : "Oh no! Now which way am I suppose to take? Aargh! Plz help me God!"

She turned back and as soon as she did so, she bumped into something as solid as a pillar. She was caught offguard and was utterly startled to see the same guy standing there. Nandini stepped backwards with her eyes widened in astonishment. She didn't even heard him coming as she was quite sure that had anyone treaded on the floor of the forest which was enveloped with dry leaves, she would have heard the rustling of the leaves.

Nandini : "Woah! When did you come? I didn't heard you coming, neither any footsteps nor the rustling of the leaves!"

The guy replied in his signature indifferent manner : "When you were engrossed in your useless rambling."

Nandini was still confused: "But
"

However she was interrupted by him as he spoke in his enchanting yet cold voice : "That's the way."

Nandini was even more befuddled by this abrupt declaration: "What?"

The guy elucidated : "The way that leads to the main road. Lets go."

And without waiting for her response, he headed in the direction. Nandini frowned at him but the next moment she too strode off behind him.

They were walking beside each other but still a strange silence had enveloped the ambience. Nandini was stealing glances of her strange companion. Indubitably he was incredibly handsome but a strange aura of coldness and emotionlessness surrounded him. Nandini found herself pondering over why his hands were so cold. Okay she agreed that Amrauli was a hill station and it was cold here most of the time of a year, but still his hands were abnormally cold, even more than her hands. And those cold and emotionless eyes which possessed the power to entice a person with enchanting power, get the person drowned in their depth and also to drive the person away proliferating a strong sense of trepidation in the person's mind. Shoving away all kinds of weird thoughts, Nandini thought of making an attempt to commence a conversation as the silence was getting on her nerves now though it wasn't apparently bothering him at all.

Nandini : "uh
thanks anyways for saving my life."

The guy : "That's okay."

Nandini frowned at his lack of reaction but still she didn't accept defeat and continued : "I'hv returned here after a long time. I know nothing about these forests. Hence I got lost."

The guy : "Hmmm.."

Nandini was really frustrated by now and couldn't help asking : "Do you always talk this less?"

Instead of replying to her, the guy asked her back : "Do you always talk this much? Like a chatterbox?"

Nandini pouted and replied : "Yes. Because I'm just another normal person. Not like you who just keeps tight-lipped always."

The guy : "I talk only when its necessary."

Nandini frowned at his reply and decided to tread along without any further conversation. However, after a few while her resolution went down the drain and the overpowering silence once again began to eat her up.

Nandini : "um
what's your name by the way?"

The guy replied with his eyes fixed in front : "Your driver."

Nandini was bemused by his reply : "Huh! What?"

It was then that the guy turned towards her, transfixing her gaze with his entrancing eyes and replied: "There's your driver searching for you. We have reached the outskirts of the forest."

With a jolt, realization dawned on Nandini and she whirled around only to find that they had actually reached the outskirts of the forest and the main road as well as the car and the apparently fretful driver came to view through the more spaciously arranged cluster of trees. Nandini thanked God in her mind and increased her pace.

Without turning back she replied : "Thank God! And thanks to you too
um
Mr.Saviour. Lets go."

Within a few moments, she reached the spot where the car was stationed. As soon as she came to a halt, the driver approached her. Apprehension and anxiety were starkly visible in his face, his forehead was crinkled with worry.

Driver : "Where did you dissapear Madamji? I was worried like hell!"

Nandini replied sheepishly : "um
sorry baba! Actually I saw a very cute rabbit and while chasing it I reached the interior of the forest and lost my way. He saved me."

Driver cocked up his brows in confusion and asked in an inquisitive tone: "Whom are you talking about?"

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