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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--
Interesting CS and prologue...I specially liked three ranawat brothers...waiting for first update.

di ud is updated..

see hav a luk...

dark fantasy-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/59634685

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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

woowww...simply awsum..

u had really made me imagine it all...

with u writing..

seems like im watching a movie...

cont. soon..

thnx for the pm...

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shruja

@shruja

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

awesome part!!
loved description
liked mysterious but still playing imp part in story!
loved entry of nandini! n her cheerful nature!
so old driver must be having some exp or info abt those creatures!
he consider her as his daughter! n got ready to take her!
but wht happend to his car? me too thinking its machanical error or else other kind?
ohh tht cute white rabbit must be msgner of our hero!
so she lost her way to return but not lost her confidence!
i liked her this quality
again forest played his part! who was behind bush!!
so our hero on the way to save her

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Shreya

@sparksfly

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

wow !! wat a brilliant start !!!!

luvd it !!!

very mystrous n intrstng !!

it was amazng !!!

ur usage of words is awesum !!!!

uve descrbd d scenery n Nandni's thoughts beautifully !!

luv d story already !!

spell bindng descrption !!

waitng 4 more !!!

luv d tag line !!

luv u...

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Sonali

@sonalimurat

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Very nice uodate dera

loved it thoroughly

you wriien amazing ...Awesome

urlanguage is apt

you described so well that I couldimagine the whole stpry going infront of me .

lovedit

loved Nandin's praises abt her beuty

she chase that rabbit and went in middle of forest

liked her way scold herself and calm down very gre8fully

she ost her balance ...oooh

waiting to read next

I lovedthis stpry

continue dear

thanx for pm

love u

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Poonam Jayaswal

@Poonamjayaswal

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

1st update is lovely...keep it up!!! ur decription of nature is just awesome!!!

waiting eagerly fr next update..😊

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pranita1202

@pranita1202

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

do i have 2 say any more

i felt the update

wow wish ekta kapoor wud make PKYEK 2 with RTMC😍

rajat wud make such a irrestible vampire😳

btw i guess rajat is vampy in here right?

u description was superb👏

loved it

waiting for hot shot vampy 2 enter at super speed and save our princess😳

maza ayega

Edited by pranita1202 - 13 years ago

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ruchi

@--Ruchi--

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Great part..loved ur descriptive style...amazingly written.

continue soon.

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Nandini

@Nandini25

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: disha15
reserved.
will read in a bit n get bk to u 😊

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I have a tendency to LOVE mystical town stories.Dont ask me why,but anything with mystery interests me a lot!

I sooo love the start.Its so scary but at the same time exciting as it makes you curious to know what happens next.

Oh my gosh.Really cant wait to read more.PLEASE update next part soon.My intuition tells me im gonna love this more than jeevan saathi 😉 (which i loved more than how much you can imagine!)

I 2 luv mysterious stories

thanx sooo much

will update 2day